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My script gives me an error message whenever I end the script?

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zomspi 541

5 years ago

I literally cannot end this script, it's always a red line under the end or an error message! How the hell do I end this script?

01game.Players.PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
02 
03    player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function(character)
04 
05        if game.MarketplaceService:PlayerOwnsAsset(player,7187215) then
06 
07            game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(p) p.CharacterAdded:connect(function(c)
08 
09c.Humanoid.Died:connect(function() local cv = c.Humanoid:findFirstChild("creator") if cv
10 
11then local k = cv.Value if k and k ~= p then k.leaderstats.Money.Value =
12 
13k.leaderstats.Money.Value+4
14 
15 
16else
17 
18     game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(p) p.CharacterAdded:connect(function(c)
19 
20c.Humanoid.Died:connect(function() local cv = c.Humanoid:findFirstChild("creator") if cv
21 
22then local k = cv.Value if k and k ~= p then k.leaderstats.Money.Value =
23 
24k.leaderstats.Money.Value+4
25 
26end end end) end) end)
27 
28 
29 end
30end)
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Thanks!

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Answered by

JasonTheOwner 391

5 years ago

Well, you needed some more "ends" and closed ends for the functions.... I think there's a ton of redundancy here and maybe this code should be reorganized a bit.. You're setting up character added events 3 times.... all nested within a player added event... This will at least get your script running without an error, but not sure if it works, otherwise... Notice my comments to help figure out the puzzle of what was wrong.. and the formatting...

01game.Players.PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
02 
03    player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function(character)
04 
05        if game.MarketplaceService:PlayerOwnsAsset(player,7187215) then
06 
07            game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(p) 
08            p.CharacterAdded:connect(function(c)
09 
10            c.Humanoid.Died:connect(function() 
11 
12 
13 
14                local cv = c.Humanoid:findFirstChild("creator") 
15 
16                if cv
17 
18                then
19 
20                                    local k = cv.Value 
21 
22 
23                                    if k and k ~= p then
24 
25                                        endk.leaderstats.Money.Value = k.leaderstats.Money.Value+4
26 
27 
28                                    else
29 
30                                                            game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(p) 
31 
32                                                                    p.CharacterAdded:connect(function(c)
33 
34                                                                    c.Humanoid.Died:connect(function() 
35 
36                                                                            local cv = c.Humanoid:findFirstChild("creator") 
37                                                                            if cv
38 
39                                                                            then
40 
41                                                                                    local k = cv.Value 
42                                                                                    if k and k ~= p then
43 
44                                                                                        endk.leaderstats.Money.Value = k.leaderstats.Money.Value+4
45 
46                                                                                    end  -- end k and k ~= p
47                                                                            end -- end if cv
48 
49                                                                    end) -- c.Humanoid.Died:connect
50                                                                    end) -- p.CharacterAdded:connect
51                                                                    end) -- game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(p)
52 
53                                    end -- end if k and k ~= p then 
54                end -- end if cv
55 
56        end) -- end the died:connect (again???)
57        end) -- p.CharacterAdded:connect(function(c) (again???)
58        end) --  game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect (again)???
59 
60end --   if game.MarketplaceService:PlayerOwnsAsset(player,7187215) 
61 
62 
63 
64 
65 
66end) --  player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function(character)
67end) -- game.Players.PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
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a lot of the code is out of view.. sorry, you'll need to use the "Copy" button to see it all. JasonTheOwner 391 — 5y

My script gives me an error message whenever I end the script?

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