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Why is my script not working?

Asked by 9 years ago

This is my SIMPLE admin scripts, but I can't even get 2 commands to work together! This is what I have so far!

Permission = {"MasterAzzer"}

game.Players.ChildAdded:connect(function(Player)
Player.Chatted:connect(function(msg,speaker)
for i = 1, #Permission do
if string.lower(msg) == "fire" and Player.Name == Permission[i] then
plr = Player.Character
f = Instance.new("Fire")
f.Parent = plr.Torso
end

if string.lower(msg) == "unfire" and Player.Name == Permission[i] then
plr = Player.Character
f = plr.Torso:FindFirstChild()
if f ~= nil then
f:remove()
end
end
end

end) end)

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Answered by
Perci1 4988 Trusted Moderation Voter Community Moderator
9 years ago

Several problems here.

First, you should do the PlayerAdded event instead of ChildAdded.

Second, I'm not even sure that Chatted events HAVE a speaker parameter, but even if they do, you never used it and it's easier to just use player of the PlayerAdded event.

Third, you should should check if the new player that joined the game is an admin, and THEN connect the chatted event, instead of connecting the event to every player and checking if they're an admin after they chat.

Fourth, it would be better to put the for loop in an extra function. Although this is not necessary, it is cleaner.

Fifth, you should use 1 if statement and an elseif instead of two if statements.

Sixth, on line 14 you are basically looking for nothing. FindFirstChild() takes one argument, which is the child you are trying to find.

Here's my edited version of your script.

Permission = {"MasterAzzer"}

function isAdmin(name)
    for i,v in pairs(Permission) do
        if v:lower() == name:lower() then
            return true --Returning something stops the execution of a function and basically turns it into a variable of sorts.
        end
    end
    return false
end

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(plr)
    if isAdmin(plr.Name) == true then --If it returned true
        plr.Chatted:connect(function(msg)
            if msg:lower() == "fire" then
                local f = Instance.new("Fire",plr.Character.Torso)
            elseif msg:lower() == "unfire" then
                local f = plr.Character.Torso:FindFirstChild("Fire")
                if f then
                    f:Destroy() --Remove() is deprecated. Better to use Destroy().
                end 
            end
        end)
    end
end)


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