I need help with creating a function loading the player's inventory?

Hello there,

I've tried in multiple different ways to do the same thing. It just won't work, is there some obvious mistake I've just missed? I'm simply trying to make a function that when a user dies (or if chosen with a server event) load the users inventory. When loading the users inventory it would then check if and what gamepasses the user has. If the user has VIP, then it should not check for the other passes, but if not it should. I'm stuck.

Current Code

local mps = game:GetService("MarketplaceService")

local supercoil = game.ReplicatedStorage.SuperCoil
local supercoilid = 5892398
local HasSuperCoil = false

local grapplehook = game.ReplicatedStorage.GrappleHook
local grapplehookid = 5892399
local HasGrappleHook = false

local gravitycoil = game.ReplicatedStorage.GravityCoil
local gravitycoilid = 5892400
local HasGravityCoil = false

local speedcoil = game.ReplicatedStorage.SpeedCoil
local speedcoilid = 5892401
local HasSpeedCoil = false

local VIP = 5892397

--- Check if and what gamepasses user has.

function CheckVIP()
    game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
        player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function()
            if mps:UserOwnsGamePassAsync(player.UserId,VIP) then
                print(player.Name .. " has the VIP gamepass!")
                local clone = game.ReplicatedStorage.GrappleHook:Clone()
                clone.Parent = player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
                local clone = game.ReplicatedStorage.SuperCoil:Clone()
                clone.Parent = player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
                local clone = game.ReplicatedStorage.GravityCoil:Clone()
                clone.Parent = player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
                local clone = game.ReplicatedStorage.SpeedCoil:Clone()
                clone.Parent = player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
            else
                print(player.Name .. " does not have the VIP gamepass...")
            end
        end)
    end)
end

function CheckGrappleHook()
    game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
        player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function()
            if mps:UserOwnsGamePassAsync(player.UserId,grapplehookid) then
                print(player.Name .. " has the grapple hook gamepass!")
                local clone = game.ReplicatedStorage.GrappleHook:Clone()
                clone.Parent = player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
            else
                print(player.Name .. " does not have the grapple hook gamepass...")
            end
        end)
    end)
end

function CheckSuperCoil()
    game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
        player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function()
            if mps:UserOwnsGamePassAsync(player.UserId,supercoilid) then
                print(player.Name .. " has the Super Coil gamepass!")
                local clone = game.ReplicatedStorage.SuperCoil:Clone()
                clone.Parent = player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
            else
                print(player.Name .. " does not have the Super Coil gamepass...")
            end
        end)
    end)
end

function CheckSpeedCoil()
    game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
        player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function()
            if mps:UserOwnsGamePassAsync(player.UserId,speedcoilid) then
                print(player.Name .. " has the Speed Coil gamepass!")
                local clone = game.ReplicatedStorage.SpeedCoil:Clone()
                clone.Parent = player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
            else
                print(player.Name .. " does not have the Speed Coil gamepass...")
            end
        end)
    end)
end

function CheckGravityCoil()
    game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
        player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function()
            if mps:UserOwnsGamePassAsync(player.UserId,gravitycoilid) then
                print(player.Name .. " has the Gravity Coil gamepass!")
                local clone = game.ReplicatedStorage.GravityCoil:Clone()
                clone.Parent = player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
            else
                print(player.Name .. " does not have the Gravity Coil gamepass...")
            end
        end)
    end)
end

function LoadInventory()
    game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
        player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function()
            player:WaitForChild("Backpack")
            if mps:UserOwnsGamePassAsync(player.UserId,5892397) then
                print("The script won't go further than here.")
                CheckVIP()
            else
                CheckGrappleHook()
                CheckSuperCoil()
                CheckSpeedCoil()
                CheckGravityCoil()
            end
        end)
    end)
end

game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
    player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function()
        LoadInventory()
        print(player.Name .. "'s inventory has been loaded.")
    end)
end)

LoadInventory()