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Help with neatness and organization?

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kevinnight45 550 Moderation Voter
10 years ago

I want to make this code smaller,but I don't know anyway. Please,show you how manged to make organize it and give tips if you can. (:

while true do
    wait(.1)
--~--~--Varibles--~--~--~--~--
local ClientSeconds = tick()
Hour = math.floor(ClientSeconds/3600)
Minutes = math.floor(ClientSeconds/60%60)
Seconds = math.floor(ClientSeconds%60)
local TimeGui = script.Parent
local SecondsGui = script.Parent.Parent.Seconds
------------Table for Numbers with no space-----
NumbersWithNoSpace = {0,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9}--Numbers with no space
------Removes the Space between Minutes-------
if Minutes == 0 or 1 or 2 or 3 or 4 or 5 or 6 or 7 or 8 or 9--Removes space in Minutes
    then
    TimeGui.Text = Hour..":"..Minutes.."0"
else
    TimeGui.Text = Hour..":"..Minutes
------Removes the Space between Seconds-------
if Seconds == 0 or 1 or 2 or 3 or 4 or 5 or 6 or 7 or 8 or 9 --Removes Space In Seconds
    then
    SecondsGui.Text = Seconds.."0"
else
    SecondsGui.Text = Seconds
-------------Main Time Controller-------------
TimeGui.Text = Seconds
TimeGui.Text = Hour..":"..Minutes
wait(.1)
SecondsGui.Text = Seconds
TimeGui.Text = Hour.." "..Minutes
-----------------------------------------------
end
end
end

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Answered by
TurboFusion 1821 Moderation Voter
10 years ago

Here, I sort of fixed it for you:

while true do
    wait()
    --~--~--Varibles--~--~--~--~--
    local ClientSeconds = tick()
    Hour = math.floor(ClientSeconds/3600)
    Minutes = math.floor(ClientSeconds/60)%60
    Seconds = math.floor(ClientSeconds)%60
    local TimeGui = script.Parent
    local SecondsGui = script.Parent.Parent.Seconds
    ------Removes the Space between Minutes-------
    TimeGui.Text = Hour..":"..(tostring(Minutes:len()) == 1 and ("0"..Minutes) or Minutes) --Using a ternary operation to get rid of the big conditional
    ------Removes the Space between Seconds-------
    SecondsGui.Text = (tostring(Seconds:len()) == 1 and ("0"..Seconds) or Seconds)
    -------------Main Time Controller-------------
    SecondsGui.Text = Seconds
    TimeGui.Text = Hour..":"..Minutes
    wait(.1)
    SecondsGui.Text = Seconds
    TimeGui.Text = Hour.." "..Minutes
end

I also fixed some minor errors that I saw, so it should work fine now. Hope this helped!

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