Is there anything wrong with this?

I am trying to make a lock on screen on some block but it won't work.

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(player)
    script.LocalScript:clone().Parent = player.CharacterAdded:wait()
end)
local cam = Workspace.CurrentCamera
cam.CameraSubject = Workspace.FixedOnCamera
cam.CameraType = "Fixed"
cam.CoordinateFrame=CFrame.new(-88.61, 64.032, 28.447)
cam.Focus=CFrame.new(-88.61, 64.032, 28.447)