Filtering enabled round script wont work?

Im making a round script with FE and i'm fairly new to scripting. I thought I did everything right as it worked when I played solo but when I started a server it wouldn't work.

My remote event is located in Replicated Storage and so is my int val

Script this is located in ServerScriptService

local play = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local Int = game:GetService("ReplicatedStorage"):WaitForChild("Int")



game.ReplicatedStorage.Intermis.OnServerEvent:Connect(function(player, text, tim)
while true do   
            text.Text = "Intermission = "..Int.Value
            Int.Value = Int.Value - 10
            wait(1)
    if Int.Value == 0 then
        for _,player in pairs (game.Players:GetPlayers()) do        
            if player.Character then            
            player.Character:MoveTo(Vector3.new(game.Workspace.tele.Position))
            text.Visible = false
    if text.Visible == false then
        for  i = 6, 1, -1  do
            tim.Visible = true
            tim.Text = "Time Left = "..i
            wait(1)
    if i == 1 then
            play.Character:MoveTo(Vector3.new(197.927, -48.632, -116.923))
            Int.Value = 30
            text.Visible = true
            tim.Visible = false
                            end
                        end
                    end
                end
            end
        end
    end
end)

Local Script It is located in a ScreenGui which is located in StarterGui and so is both TextLabels (the time is also a TextLabel)

local inter = game:GetService("ReplicatedStorage")
inter:WaitForChild("Intermis"):FireServer(script.Parent.TextLabel, script.Parent.time)