Gamepass script not responding, and doesn't seem to do anything either, Help?

wait(100)

local d = false

local Player1 = {
    "Colorester",
    "Deadman0890"   
}

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(player)
    player.CharacterAdded:connect(function(character) --I don't even use the character lol
        if game:GetService("MarketplaceService"):PlayerOwnsAsset(player,1499745006) or player.Name == Player1 then
            if player.Character.Name == game.Players:FindFirstChild(player) and d == false then
                    d = true
                    while d == true do
                    local riotCopy = game.ServerStorage["[SCP] Card-L5"]:Clone()
                    riotCopy.Parent = player.Backpack
                    wait(10)
                    d = false
                end
            end
        end
    end)
end)

I have the tool "[SCP] Card-L5 in game.ServerStorage, I double checked the AssetID of the pass, and the or Exception for my and one other's username. Could someone help me with this? Can't seem to figure it out. The script in in ServerScriptStorage, which replicates to all clients in FE, which my game is.