How-To Get this Script to Work in a Server instead of Client?

I basically have this script where whenever a player jumps, it'll toggle some text on the top of the screen. It'll say "Jump when you are ready" then when someone jumps, it'll toggle "Shoot!". Basically, it'll give someone an idea when to release the tool after a given number of seconds.

Here's the script, it basically deals with humanoids and their jump functions.

Local Script

local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local character = player.Character

repeat wait() until character

humanoid = character:WaitForChild("Humanoid")

local label = script.Parent
local debounce = true

local playergui = player:WaitForChild("PlayerGui")
local lukemode = playergui:WaitForChild("LukeMode")
local value = lukemode:WaitForChild("Value")

humanoid.Changed:connect(function()
    if humanoid.Jump == true then
        if debounce then
        debounce = false
        if value.Value == true then
        wait(0.2)
        else
        wait(0.35)
        end
        label.Text = "Shoot!"
        wait(1)
        label.Text = "Cooldown.."
        debounce = true
        wait(1)
        label.Text = "Jump when you are ready."
        end
    end
end)

Now this doesn't work when it's in server-side, which I tried to attempt down below.

Attempted Server Side:

local debounce = true

function onTouched(hit)
    if hit.Name == "VBL_Ball" or hit.Parent:IsA("Tool") then
        wait()
    else
    local character = hit.Parent
    print("character found")
    local player = game.Players:GetPlayerFromCharacter(character)
    print("player found")
    local humanoid = character:WaitForChild("Humanoid")
    print("humanoid found")
    local gui = player:WaitForChild("PlayerGui")
    print("gui found")
    local screen = gui:WaitForChild("ScreenGui")
    print("screen found")
    local frame = screen:WaitForChild("Frame")
    print("frame found")
    local label = frame:WaitForChild("TextLabel")
    print("label found")
    local lukemode = gui:WaitForChild("LukeMode")
    print("lukemode found")
    local value = lukemode:WaitForChild("Value")
    print("value found")
    humanoid.Changed:connect(function()
        print("humanoid changed")
        humanoid.Jumping:connect(function()
        print("humanoid jumping")
        if humanoid.Jump == true then
        print("humanoid jump")
        if debounce then
        debounce = false
        if value.Value == true then
        wait(0.2)
        else
        wait(0.35)
        end
        label.Text = "Shoot!"
        wait(1)
        label.Text = "Cooldown.."
        debounce = true
        wait(1)
        label.Text = "Jump when you are ready."
        end
    end
    end)
    end)
    end
end

script.Parent.Touched:connect(onTouched)

What's Suppose to Happen in the End (Only works in Client):

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Hopefully you guys can figure out a solution to my problem.

Sincerely,

LukeGabrieI