How do I convert a script from Data Persistence to Data Stores?

Hi! I wanted to convert my old data persistence script to use the new data stores but this doesn't save "cash" at all and I don't really know why. Can anyone point me in the right direction?

Thanks, MD

local DataStore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore("Cash")
local key = "user_" .. player.userId

function saveScore(player, score)
    SetAsync(key, score)
end

function loadScore(player, clickCounter)
    local score = GetAsync(key)
    if score ~= 0 then
        clickCounter.Value = score
    end
end

function onPlayerEntered(newPlayer)
        local stats = Instance.new("IntValue")
        stats.Name = "leaderstats"
        local clicks = Instance.new("IntValue")
        clicks.Name = "Cash"  
        clicks.Value = 0
        clicks.Parent = stats
        stats.Parent = newPlayer
        loadScore(newPlayer, clicks)
end

function onPlayerRemoving(player)
    print("Attempting to save score for " .. player.Name)
    local stats = player:FindFirstChild("leaderstats")
    if (stats ~= nil) then 
        local clicks = stats:FindFirstChild("Cash") 
        if (clicks ~= nil) then
            saveScore(player, clicks.Value)
            DataStore:UpdateAsync(key, function(oldValue)
            local newValue = oldValue or 0 --oldValue might be nil
            newValue = clicks
            end)
            end
    end
end