When Game loads it only give tool to one player?

this sisa very long script but I need to show you all of it to understand so I will put this in where I have the problem --Bob and then Ill close it off with --/Bob so when my game loads when I server test it only gives the tool to one player which is the second player that loaded so Im thinking somewhere there needs to be a waitforchild or a complete wait() please help me I will give a rep thanks johndeer2233 how Can I fix This?

-- Made By johndeer2233
-- Make a hint
h = Instance.new("Hint",game.Workspace)

--If there is more than 1 player
while true do
if game.Players.NumPlayers > 1 then
   -- Choosing A Map
   maps = game.ServerStorage.Maps:GetChildren() 
   h.Text =  "Choosing A Map"
   wait(3) 
   ranGame = math.random(1,#maps)
   ChosenGame = maps[ranGame]   
   h.Text =  "Map Chosen: "..ChosenGame.Name
   wait(3)
   ChosenGameClone = ChosenGame:Clone()
   ChosenGameClone.Parent = game.Workspace
   wait(3)
-- Teleport Players To Map
local spawns = ChosenGameClone.Spawns:GetChildren()
    for i,v in pairs(game.Players:GetPlayers()) do
        name = v.Name
        check = game.Workspace:FindFirstChild(name)
        if check then
          checkHumanoid = check:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")
         if checkHumanoid then
            v.Character:MoveTo(spawns[i].Position)
            end             
        end 
    end
  -- **Bob**
    -- if certain Maps/Gives Tools
if ChosenGameClone.Name == "OfficeMap"then
    function GiveToolThrowingKnife()
    local name2 = game.Players:FindFirstChild(name)
    if name2 then
    local playersBackpack = name2:WaitForChild("Backpack")
    if playersBackpack then
    local ThrowingKnife = game.ServerStorage.ThrowingKnife
    if ThrowingKnife then
    local ThrowingKnifeClone = ThrowingKnife:Clone() 
    ThrowingKnifeClone.Parent = playersBackpack
                end
            end
        end
    end
    GiveToolThrowingKnife()
end
    --**/Bob**

    --Timer Before Game Starts
for i = 3, 0, -1 do
 h.Text =  "Time Till Game Begins: "..i
wait(1)
end
h.Text = "Game Begins"
-- Countdown till game ends
for i = 180, 1, -1 do   
 h.Text =  "Time Left: "..i
wait(1)
end
h.Text = "Game Ended"
ChosenGameClone:Destroy()
else    
   h.Text =  "There Is Not Enough Players To Start"
   wait(3)  
    end
 wait(1)
end