Why wont this gui work?

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local debounce = false -- A code that keeps a function from running too many times (Don't touch that, it'll break otherwise)
local main = script.Parent.Parent.Parent
local owner = main.Owner
local income = main.Income
local tn = main.Parent.TycoonName
local price = 150 -- Price of the income upgrade (You can change the price if you want)
local priceadd = 150 -- How much money is added when the cilent upgrades the income
local incomeadd = 5 -- How much income is added when the cilent upgrades the income
local times = 1 -- How many times you can upgrade your income before it disappears
local dv = game.Workspace.Tycoon.DataValues


script.Parent.Touched:connect(function(hit)
    if (debounce == false) then
        debounce = true
        local h = hit.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")
        if (h ~= nil) then
            local p = game.Players:FindFirstChild(hit.Parent.Name)
            if (p ~= nil) then
                if owner.Value ~= p.Name then
                    for GuiReveal = 1, 0, -0.05 do
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Text = "You are not the owner of this "..tn.Value.."!"
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(0, 0, 0, 50), Out, Quad, 0.5, false)
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Transparency = GuiReveal
                        wait()
                    end
                    wait(3)
                    for GuiReveal = 0, 1, 0.15 do
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(-1.2, 0, 0, 50), Out, Quad, 0.5, false)
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Transparency = GuiReveal
                        wait()
                    end
                    wait(2)
                    debounce = false
                return end
                if p.leaderstats.Money.Value < price then
                    for GuiReveal = 1, 0, -0.05 do
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Text = "You cannot afford this! You need $"..price - p.leaderstats.Money.Value.." more to upgrade income!"
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(0, 0, 0, 50), Out, Quad, 0.5, false)
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Transparency = GuiReveal
                        wait()
                    end
                    wait(3)
                    for GuiReveal = 0, 1, 0.15 do
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(-1.2, 0, 0, 50), Out, Quad, 0.5, false)
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Transparency = GuiReveal
                        wait()
                    end
                    wait(2)
                    debounce = false
                return end
                        '           
                if dv.IncomeProgress.Value == 0 then
                    for GuiReveal = 1, 0, -0.05 do
                    p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Text = "Zero"
                return end
                '
                if p.leaderstats.Money.Value >= price then
                    p.leaderstats.Money.Value = p.leaderstats.Money.Value - price
                    price = price + priceadd
                    income.Value = income.Value + incomeadd
                    script.Parent.Parent.Name = "Upgrade Income - $"..price
                    for GuiReveal = 1, 0, -0.05 do
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Text = "Income upgraded! Your salary is now $"..income.Value.."!"
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(0, 0, 0, 50), Out, Quad, 0.5, false)
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Transparency = GuiReveal
                    end
                    wait(3)
                    for GuiReveal = 0, 1, 0.05 do
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(-1.2, 0, 0, 50), Out, Quad, 0.5, false)
                        p.PlayerGui.TycoonGui.Notice.Transparency = GuiReveal
                    end
                    if times > 0 then
                        times = times - 1
                    else
                        if times == 0 then
                            for i = 0.4, 1, 0.01 do
                                script.Parent.Transparency = i
                                wait()
                            end
                            script.Parent.Parent:Remove()
                        end
                    end
                end
            end
        end
        wait(2)
        debounce = false
    end
end)