Where did you learn to script?

If you want to learn how to script, then here is the link to it: http://wiki.roblox.com/index.php/Tutorials

Hello. If you want to learn to script, I have a good thing for you. Go on the profile of this user and search for Learn To Script in his models, its name is sdfgw.

P.S: If you want to make a "onTouched" event, Dont forget to add

script.Parent.Touched:connect(function name here)

at the end

It should look like

function onTouched(hit)
    script.Parent.Transparency = 1
    wait(1)
    script.Parent.Transparency = 0
end

script.Parent.Touched:connect(onTouched)

These 2 sites will help you a LOT:

http://wiki.roblox.com/index.php/Scripting_Book

http://www.lua.org/pil/1.html

You first want to learn the basic events. Like

Player Clicked

Player Touched

Value Changed

Player Left

Player Joined You also want to learn

If

elseif

else

and the difference between end and end)

Then You want to learn how to start a function. Then you can make your own scripts.

Getting better takes mastering what you have learned, then trying new things.