How come this script doesn't work it keeps killing me for osme reason I dont't know why? [closed]

local Door = script.Parent
local enter = 'duckyo01', 'Player' -- should be a table
script.Parent.Touched:connect(function(hit)
    if hit.Parent then --everyhting has a parent besides game
        local hum = hit.Parent:FindFirstChild('Humanoid')
        if hum then -- no since should of been if hum
        if hum.Name == enter then -- enter has 2 values so.
            Door.Transparency = 0.5
            Door.CanCollide = false
        else
            hum.Health = 0
            end
        end
    end
end)

local Door = script.Parent
local allowed = {"duckyo01","Player"}

script.Parent.Touched:connect(function(hit)
if hit.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid") ~= nil then -- checks if the hit's parents found humanoid aka if it's a player
local player = hit.Parent --variablize it
accepted = false -- debouncer
for i,v in pairs(allowed) do 
if v:lower() == player.Name:lower() then -- compares table naes to real
accepted = true -- checked
end
if accepted == true then -- yo stuff after dis is right gg m8
Door.Trasnparency = .5
Door.CanCollide = false
else
hum.Humanoid.Health = 0
end
end
end)

One of ways you can increase your scripting efficiency is reducing the amount of if statement you use simply using and . I suggest storing all your string inside a Table since it make your code looks a lot cleaner and nicer.

    local Allowed = {"UserOnly16Characters","duckyo01","Player"}--Table Storing random strings.
script.Parent.Touched:connect(function(Hit)--Function listen for the Touched event.
    local Player = game.Players:GetPlayerFromCharacter(Hit.Parent)--Checks to see if the Part that triggered the function is controlled by a Player!
       local Access = false--Check
    for _, v in pairs (Allowed) do--Loops through the Tabled(Allowed) that we created.
        if v == Player.Name then--Check to see if any of the Strings in the table matches the Player/Object who triggered the event.
        Access = true--If it matches then this will be true.
        end
    end 
if Player and Access == true then--If the Part that triggered the function is controlled by a Player and is and is Allowed then
    script.Parent.Transparency = 0.5--Turns the Parts Transparency  to 0.5
    script.Parent.CanCollide = false-- Turns Parts the CanCollide false so the Player can go through the door.
    wait(3)
    script.Parent.Transparency = 0--Turns the Parts Transparency to 0
    script.Parent.CanCollide = true--Make sure no one else that doesn't have access can go through the "Door".
else
    Player.Character.Humanoid.Health = nil--If the Player isn't Allowed then He or she dies Muahah. xD
    end
end)