Is this script correct?

This is a script I'm using to show a gui to only one person. Here is the script. Please if I do have some things wrong don't down vote....

script.Parent.Visible = false
local modscreen = script.Parent 
local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer

if player.Name == "DigitalZer3" then
    script.Parent.Visible = true


end

if player.Name ~= "DigitalZer3" then
    print("k")
end
if player.Name == "DigitalZer3" and script.Parent.Visible == true then
    print('its alive!')
end

PLEASE IF I HAVE SOMETHING WRONG CORRECT IT, IT WOULD BE VERY HELPFULL. :D