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What is wrong with my keydown script?

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9 years ago

001bin = script.Parent
002 
003me = script.Parent.Parent.Parent
004 
005local enabled = true
006local bin = script.Parent
007bin.Selected:connect(function(mouse)
008    mouse.KeyDown:connect(function(key)
009        if key == "c" then
010 
011        if enabled == false then
012        return
013    end
014 
015    enabled = false
016 
017    me.Character.Torso.Anchored = true
018    RightShoulder = me.Character.Torso["Right Shoulder"]
019    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.1,0,0)
020    wait(0.1)
021    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.2,0,0)
022    wait(0.1)
023    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.3,0,0)
024    wait(0.1)
025    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.4,0,0)
026    wait(0.1)
027    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.5,0,0)
028    wait(0.1)
029 
030 
031 
032 
033        game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Survey the Heavens, Open the Heavens...")
034    wait(0.5)
035        game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Oh 88 Stars of the heaven...")
036        wait(0.1)
037        game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Shine!")
038        wait(0.1)
039        game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Urano Metria!")
040        wait(0.1)
041 
042    local model = bin.Monster:clone() 
043    me.Character.Humanoid.Name = "Me"
044    model.Parent = me.Character
045    model:MakeJoints()
046    model.Gemini.Torso.CFrame = me.Character.Torso.CFrame * CFrame.new(9,0,0)
047    model.Gemini.Follow.Disabled = false
048 
049    LeftShoulder = model.Gemini.Torso["Left Shoulder"]
050    LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.1,0,0)
051    wait(0.1)
052    LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.2,0,0)
053    wait(0.1)
054    LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.3,0,0)
055    wait(0.1)
056    LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.4,0,0)
057    wait(0.1)
058    LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.5,0,0)
059    wait(0.1)
060 
061 
062 
063    MagicSym = Instance.new("Part")
064    MagicSym.Parent = me.Character.Torso
065    MagicSym.Anchored = true
066    MagicSym.CanCollide = false
067    MagicSym.formFactor = "Symmetric"
068    MagicSym.BrickColor = BrickColor.new("New Yeller")
069    MagicSym.Transparency = 1
070    MagicSym.Name = "MagicSym"
071    MagicSym.Size = Vector3.new(30, 1, 30)
072    MagicSym.TopSurface = "Smooth"
073    MagicSym.CFrame = me.Character.Torso.CFrame*CFrame.new(4.5,-3, 0)
074 
075d = Instance.new("Decal")
076d.Name = "Circle"
077d.Parent = MagicSym
078d.Face = "Top"
079d.Texture = "http://www.roblox.com/asset/?id=214848393"
080 
081 
082 
083    for loop = 1, 200 do
084    MagicSym.CFrame = MagicSym.CFrame *CFrame.Angles(0, 0.005, 0)
085    wait(1/25)
086    end
087 
088 
089 
090 
091 
092wait(3)
093MagicSym:Remove()
094    me.Character.Torso.Anchored = false
095RightShoulder = me.Character.Torso["Right Shoulder"]
096    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.4,0,0)
097    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.3,0,0)
098    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.2,0,0)
099    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.1,0,0)
100    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0,0,0)
101    RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.5,0,0)
102 
103 
104    if me.Character:FindFirstChild("Monster")~= nil then   
105    game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Thank you!")
106    model:remove()
107    me.Character.Me.Name = "Humanoid"
108    else
109    end
110        if me.Character:FindFirstChild("Me")~= nil then
111        me.Character.Me.Name = "Humanoid"
112        else
113    end
114    wait()
115 
116    enabled = true
117 
118    mouse.Icon = "rbxasset://textures\\GunCursor.png"
119 
120end
121 
122function onSelected(mouse)
123    mouse.Icon = "rbxasset://textures\\GunCursor.png"
124    mouse.Button1Down:connect(function() onButton1Down(mouse) end)
125end
126 
127 
128 
129bin.Selected:connect(onSelected)
130end           
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The problem is that it does not run. It used to be a MouseButton1click but I decided to make it a keydown. Right now nothing happens. Error:

17:41:13.070 - Players.Player1.Backpack.Urano.LocalScript:134: ')' expected (to close '(' at line 8) near '<eof>'

Maybe you should tell us what is wrong instead of asking what is wrong so we can fix what is wrong? 1waffle1 2908 — 9y

There are no "end)" If you're gonna make a event function, You need to have "end)" not "end" KenzaXI 166 — 9y

1 answer

Answered by

Redbullusa 1580

9 years ago

Let's start with the error message. It gives you a clue on what's going on. In case if you didn't know, eof means end of file, or basically the end of the script.

So basically we're missing some ends! This would've been avoided if you tabbed your code correctly.

001bin = script.Parent
002 
003me = script.Parent.Parent.Parent
004--[[
005    or
006    local Player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
007    local Character = Player.Character or Player.CharacterAdded:wait()
008--]]
009 
010local enabled = true
011local bin = script.Parent
012 
013bin.Selected:connect(function(mouse)
014    mouse.KeyDown:connect(function(key)
015        if key == "c" then
016            if enabled == false then
017                return
018            end
019            enabled = false
020            me.Character.Torso.Anchored = true
021            RightShoulder = me.Character.Torso["Right Shoulder"]
022            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.1,0,0)
023            wait(0.1)
024            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.2,0,0)
025            wait(0.1)
026            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.3,0,0)
027            wait(0.1)
028            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.4,0,0)
029            wait(0.1)
030            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(-0.5,0,0)
031            wait(0.1)
032            game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Survey the Heavens, Open the Heavens...")
033            wait(0.5)
034            game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Oh 88 Stars of the heaven...")
035            wait(0.1)
036            game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Shine!")
037            wait(0.1)
038            game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Urano Metria!")
039            wait(0.1)
040            local model = bin.Monster:clone() 
041            me.Character.Humanoid.Name = "Me"
042            model.Parent = me.Character
043            model:MakeJoints()
044            model.Gemini.Torso.CFrame = me.Character.Torso.CFrame * CFrame.new(9,0,0)
045            model.Gemini.Follow.Disabled = false
046            LeftShoulder = model.Gemini.Torso["Left Shoulder"]
047            LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.1,0,0)
048            wait(0.1)
049            LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.2,0,0)
050            wait(0.1)
051            LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.3,0,0)
052            wait(0.1)
053            LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.4,0,0)
054            wait(0.1)
055            LeftShoulder.C0 = LeftShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.5,0,0)
056            wait(0.1)
057            MagicSym = Instance.new("Part")
058            MagicSym.Parent = me.Character.Torso
059            MagicSym.Anchored = true
060            MagicSym.CanCollide = false
061            MagicSym.formFactor = "Symmetric"
062            MagicSym.BrickColor = BrickColor.new("New Yeller")
063            MagicSym.Transparency = 1
064            MagicSym.Name = "MagicSym"
065            MagicSym.Size = Vector3.new(30, 1, 30)
066            MagicSym.TopSurface = "Smooth"
067            MagicSym.CFrame = me.Character.Torso.CFrame*CFrame.new(4.5,-3, 0)
068            d = Instance.new("Decal")
069            d.Name = "Circle"
070            d.Parent = MagicSym
071            d.Face = "Top"
072            d.Texture = "http://www.roblox.com/asset/?id=214848393"
073            for loop = 1, 200 do
074                MagicSym.CFrame = MagicSym.CFrame *CFrame.Angles(0, 0.005, 0)
075                wait(1/25)
076            end
077            wait(3)
078            MagicSym:Destroy() -- Don't use :Remove()!
079            me.Character.Torso.Anchored = false
080            RightShoulder = me.Character.Torso["Right Shoulder"]
081            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.4,0,0)
082            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.3,0,0)
083            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.2,0,0)
084            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.1,0,0)
085            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0,0,0)
086            RightShoulder.C0 = RightShoulder.C0*CFrame.Angles(0.5,0,0)
087            if me.Character:FindFirstChild("Monster")~= nil then   
088                game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(me.Character.Head, "Thank you!")
089                model:Destroy() -- Don't use :Remove()!
090                me.Character.Me.Name = "Humanoid"
091            else
092            end
093            if me.Character:FindFirstChild("Me")~= nil then
094                me.Character.Me.Name = "Humanoid"
095            else
096            end
097            wait()
098 
099            enabled = true
100            mouse.Icon = "rbxasset://textures\\GunCursor.png"
101        end
102-- We're missing 2 ends here.
103 
104function onSelected(mouse)
105    mouse.Icon = "rbxasset://textures\\GunCursor.png"
106    mouse.Button1Down:connect(function() onButton1Down(mouse) end)
107    -- There's no such function as "onButton1Down()"
108end
109 
110bin.Selected:connect(onSelected)
111end -- This is not needed. You're not really closing anything.
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If you want to further improve your script, please look into...

Local variables

:Destroy() method

UserInputService

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