Character Creation, GUI [HELP ERROR]?

Basically, i'm trying to make it so the code will make the character only viewable by the owner of that character, the camera positioning worked just fine, the only problem is that no I'm not able to see the character at all, and that when i look inside of the Cameras Children, it has a blank noobish character.

local Player = game.Players.LocalPlayer 
local Cam = game.Workspace.CurrentCamera 

TheCreationz = Player.Character
TheCreationz.Archivable = true
ThePartTwo = TheCreationz:clone()
ThePartTwo.Parent = Cam
Cam.CameraSubject = ThePartTwo.Torso
Cam.FieldOfView = 30
Cam.CameraType = "Scriptable"
Cam.CoordinateFrame = CFrame.new(0,5,20)
Cam.Focus = CFrame.new(0,-5,0)