why wont my GUIs show up?

So what im trying to do is when a part is clicked, two GUIs show up. the first sctipt is when the part gets clicked

script.Parent.ClickDetector.MouseClick:connect(function()
    script.Parent.Click.Updating:Fire()
end)

so i did a Bindable Event because ClickDetector only works in regular Scripts (is what the wiki must have meant by Script) and used a local script for the gui part of it.

local paper = game.StarterGui.Papers.one
paper.Visible = true
paper.Letter.Text = ("Text "..game.Players.LocalPlayer.Name.."Text") 

thanks!