Can you help me with Gamepass problems?

Hello everyone, I have a GamepassHandler script in ServerScriptService. The script is meant to give Cash, Gear, Health, Speed, or maybe one in specific if you have the required Gamepass. I have it all set-up but when I test it in Studio and on a live server I don't get ANYTHING even though I have all 3 Gamepasses since I made the game. I was wondering what was wrong with the script, and maybe a correction on how to fix it?

Script:

pcall(function()
    game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(player)
        if game.GamePassService:PlayerHasPass(player,253570419) then
            local cashmoney = game.ServerStorage.MoneyStorage:WaitForChild(player.Name)
            cashmoney.Value = cashmoney.Value + 10000
            player.CharacterAdded:connect(function(char)
                if char:WaitForChild("Humanoid") then
                    char.Humanoid.MaxHealth = char.Humanoid.MaxHealth + 25
                    char.Humanoid.Health = char.Humanoid.Health + 25
                    char.Humanoid.WalkSpeed = char.Humanoid.WalkSpeed + 8
                    game.Lighting.GalacticMinigun:Clone().Parent=player.Backpack
                end
            end)
            local msg = Instance.new("Hint",workspace)
            msg.Text = player.Name.." joined the game with Ultra V.I.P."
            wait(2)
            msg:Destroy()
        if game.GamePassService:PlayerHasPass(player,253577465) then
            local cashmoney = game.ServerStorage.MoneyStorage:WaitForChild(player.Name)
            cashmoney.Value = cashmoney.Value + 2500
            player.CharacterAdded:connect(function(char)
                if char:WaitForChild("Humanoid") then
                    char.Humanoid.MaxHealth = char.Humanoid.MaxHealth + 5
                    char.Humanoid.Health = char.Humanoid.Health + 5
                    char.Humanoid.WalkSpeed = char.Humanoid.WalkSpeed + 2
                    game.Lighting.RedHyperLaser:Clone().Parent=player.Backpack
                end
            end)
            local msg = Instance.new("Hint",workspace)
            msg.Text = player.Name.." joined the game as a V.I.P."
            wait(2)
            msg:Destroy()
        if game.GamePassService:PlayerHasPass(player,253578269) then
            local cashmoney = game.ServerStorage.MoneyStorage:WaitForChild(player.Name)
            cashmoney.Value = cashmoney.Value + 10000
            local msg = Instance.new("Hint",workspace)
            msg.Text = player.Name.." joined with 10,000 Cash."
            wait(2)
            msg:Destroy()
        end
    end)
end)