Help with Custom Chat Gui?

so I am making my own psuedo Custom Chat GUI. I have my scrpt in the serverscriptstorage. When I Looked at OutPut nothing seemed to be wrong so here it is. EDIT: as I said said above:) output shows nothing so what I need is for help trying to figure out whats wrong? An Ideas? This is in a normal script to..

function UpdateOldLabels(Parent)
    for i,v in pairs(Parent:GetChildren()) do
        if v.Name:sub(1,4):lower() == "line" then
            local LineNumber = v.Name:sub(5)
            if LineNumber == "13" then
                v:Destroy()
            else
                v.Name = "line"..tostring(tonumber(LineNumber) + 1)
                v.Position = v.Position - UDim2.new(0,0,0,15)
            end
        end
    end
end

game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:connect(function(player)
    player.Chatted:connect(function(msg)
        for _,v in ipairs(game:GetService("Players"):GetChildren()) do
            UpdateOldLabels(v:WaitForChild("PlayerGui").ScreenGui.Frame)
            newchatline = Instance.new("TextLabel",v:WaitForChild("PlayerGui").ScreenGui.Frame)
            newchatline.Text = player.Name.. "- " ..msg
            newchatline.Size = UDim2.new(1,0,0,15)
            newchatline.Position = UDim2.new(0,0,1,-14)
            newchatline.Font = "ArialBold"
            newchatline.TextColor3 = Color3.new(255,0,0)
            newchatline.TextStrokeTransparency = 0
            newchatline.BackgroundTransparency = 1
            newchatline.BorderSizePixel = 0
            newchatline.FontSize = "Size16"
            newchatline.TextXAlignment = "Left"
            newchatline.TextYAlignment = "Top"
            newchatline.ClipsDescendants = true
            newchatline.Name = "line1"
        end
        UpdateOldLabels(game:GetService("StarterGui").ScreenGui.Frame)
        newchatline:Clone().Parent = game:GetService("StarterGui").ScreenGui.Frame
    end)
end)

Ok Thanks I will add more detail to my chat GUI when I know its working later. :) Comment if you have any questions Below..:)