My loading screen doesn't work correctly? Also, what does % do in the second script?

It's pretty simple and I decided to just add Tweening but I get a Userdata error on line 8 of my script. I'd love a well detailed answer

Here's the script:

script.Parent:RemoveDefaultLoadingScreen()

local LoadingScreen = game.ReplicatedFirst.ScreenGui:Clone()
LoadingScreen.Parent = game.Players.LocalPlayer:WaitForChild("PlayerGui")


while game.ContentProvider.RequestQueueSize > 0  do
    LoadingScreen.Frame:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(0,0, -8,0) "Out", "Linear", 2, true)
    LoadingScreen.Frame:TweenPosition(UDim2.new(0,0, 8,0) "Out", "Linear", 2, false)

end

script.LoadingScreen:remove()

My ScreenGui is inside of ReplicatedFirst along with the LocalScript. There's no scripts inside of the ScreenGui! Also in the tutorial I saw a percentage sign "%" and wondered what this does, so if this can also be answered, Thanks.

This is the Wiki's script:

script.Parent:RemoveDefaultLoadingScreen()

local screen = Instance.new("ScreenGui")
screen.Parent = game.Players.LocalPlayer:WaitForChild("PlayerGui")

local textLabel = Instance.new("TextLabel")
textLabel.Parent = screen
textLabel.Text = "Loading"
textLabel.Size = UDim2.new(1,0,1,0)
textLabel.FontSize = Enum.FontSize.Size14

local count = 0
while game.ContentProvider.RequestQueueSize > 0  do
    textLabel.Text = "Loading " .. string.rep(".",count)
    count = (count + 1) % 4
    wait(.3) 
end

screen.Parent = nil