What is wrong with this?

Ok.. So I've been working on a snowball fight game as a basic project to start my scripting on, but for some reason my code doesn't work! My dev console dosen't find a problem, but it won't run. Can somebody help me?

while true do
    player = game.Players:GetPlayers()
    wait (5)
    for i = 1, # player do
        infogui = player[i].PlayerGui.infogui.Text
        infogui.Text = "Intermission"
    end
    wait(5)
    for i = 1, # player do
        infogui = player[i].PlayerGui.infogui.Text
        infogui.Text = "The game will start in a few."
    end
    wait(1)
    Number = 1

        for i = 1, # player do
        infogui.Text = "Loading map."
        player[i].Character.Parent = game.Workspace.Players
        print(player[i].Character)
        end
        mapchoise = "Map" .. Number
        print(mapchoise)
        local map1 = game.ServerStorage:FindFirstChild(mapchoise):Clone()
        map1.Parent = game.Workspace.RM
        wait (1)
        for i = 1, # player do
        infogui.Text = "Game in progress."
        spawnloc = math.random(1,4)
        if spawnloc == 1 then
            player[i].Character:MoveTo(map1.Spawn.Position)
        end
        if spawnloc == 2 then
        player[i].Character:MoveTo(map1.Spawn2.Position)
        end
        if spawnloc == 3 then
        player[i].Character:MoveTo(map1.Spawn3.Position)
        end
        if spawnloc == 4 then
        player[i].Character:MoveTo(map1.Spawn4.Position)
        end
        game.ServerStorage.SnowBall:Clone().Parent = player[i].Backpack
        end
        repeat
            wait(0.1)
        until game.Workspace.Players:GetChildren() == 1
    for i = 1, # player do  
    player[1]:LoadCharacter()
    infogui.Text = "Game Over!"
    end
    game.Workspace.RM:ClearAllChildren()
    end