[SOLVED] Lobby Queue System Doesn't Teleport Players To Private Server?

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2 years ago

Edited 2 years ago

I got the script from a youtube video and just edited some stuff i guess

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bxCKWMiV8CA

so this script is supposed to act like a casual story game lobby system, there's a timer and every time the timer ticks to 0, the players in the queue will get a loading screen and get teleported, and a GUI button appears to leave the queue, all of the script is working except the actual part that teleports the player to a private server of the placed. instead it gives me this error HTTP 403 (Forbidden) at line 39

sorry if this isn't described well

Server Sided Script

01local TS = game:GetService("TeleportService")
02local TweenService = game:GetService("TweenService")
03local placeId = 12804178720 -- Enter a second Id Place.
04local leaveGuiEvent = game.ReplicatedStorage:FindFirstChild('LeaveGuiEvent')
05local TransitionEvent = game.ReplicatedStorage:FindFirstChild('TransitionEvent')
06local list = {}
07local billboard = script.Parent.billboardPart.billboardGui
08local timer = nil
09local teleporting = false
10local spawnTeleport = script.Parent.spawn
11 
12local function updateGui()
13    billboard.Frame.players.Text = "Players: " ..#list.. "/1" -- Change the number 16 according to the Max Player who want to be teleported.
14end
15 
16local function removeFromList(character)
17    for i=1,#list do
18        if list[i] == character.Name then
19            table.remove(list,i)
20            updateGui()
21        end
22    end
23end
24 
25local function teleportPlayers()
26    if #list > 0 then
27        billboard.Frame.Status.Text = "TELEPORTING"
28        billboard.Frame.Status.TextColor3 = Color3.fromRGB(255, 0, 0)
29        local playersToTeleport = {}
30        local teleportTime = 0
31        for i=1,#list do
32            if game.Players:findFirstChild(list[i]) then
33                table.insert(playersToTeleport,game.Players:findFirstChild(list[i]))
34                TransitionEvent:FireClient(game.Players:findFirstChild(list[i]))
35            else
36                table.remove(list,i)    
37            end
38        end
39        local code = TS:ReserveServer(placeId)
40        teleporting = true
41        TS:TeleportToPrivateServer(placeId,code,playersToTeleport)
42        repeat wait() until #list <= 0
43        billboard.Frame.Status.Text = "READY"
44        billboard.Frame.Status.TextColor3 = Color3.fromRGB(255, 0, 0)
45        teleporting = false
46    end
47end
48 
49script.Parent.Gate.Touched:Connect(function(hit)
50    if hit.Parent:findFirstChild("Humanoid") then
51        if teleporting == false then
52            local char = hit.Parent
53            local player = game.Players:FindFirstChild(char.Name)
54            local alreadyExists = false
55 
56            for i=1,#list do
57                if list[i] == char.Name then
58                    alreadyExists = true
59                end
60            end
61 
62            if alreadyExists == false then
63                if #list < 1 then -- Many Players have been teleported.
64                    table.insert(list,char.Name)
65                    char.PrimaryPart.CFrame = spawnTeleport.CFrame
66                    updateGui()
67                    leaveGuiEvent:FireClient(player)
68                end
69 
70                player.CharacterRemoving:connect(function(character)
71                    removeFromList(character)
72                end)
73            end
74 
75        end
76    end
77end)
78 
79leaveGuiEvent.OnServerEvent:Connect(function(player)
80    if player.Character then
81        player.Character.HumanoidRootPart.Anchored = false
82        wait()
83        player.Character.Humanoid.Jump = true
84        wait()
85        player.Character:MoveTo(game.Workspace.chapter1sololeave.Position)
86        removeFromList(player.Character)
87    end
88end)
89 
90while wait() do
91    timer = 20 -- Wait time before teleport change to whawtever you want it to be
92    for i=1,timer do
93        timer = timer - 1
94        billboard.Frame.time.Text = timer
95        wait(1)
96    end
97    teleportPlayers()
98end
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Did you try this in Studio? Did you check the output? T3_MasterGamer 2189 — 2y

i tried in both studio and roblox client. i havent checked yet, ill update you on the results JmoneyPlayzOfficial 49 — 2y

i got this error HTTP 403 (Forbidden) located at line 39 JmoneyPlayzOfficial 49 — 2y

No, like I meant that if you playtested or played in Roblox App, I didn't meant that you should try both. T3_MasterGamer 2189 — 2y

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I'm asking that becuase TeleportService won't work in playtest Roblox Studio. T3_MasterGamer 2189 — 2y

well i did but i done some changes so i'll see how that goes JmoneyPlayzOfficial 49 — 2y

i tried it and it worked, thank you JmoneyPlayzOfficial 49 — 2y

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