Why when I try to clone a normal script with a local one it don't works?

Hey guys. Basically when I try to clone a normal script with a local script, the cloned normal script stops working properly inside the starterpack. If I put the script without cloning that in the starterpack, it works fine. I even tried cloning that with a normal script too, but without success.

Here's the script I wanna clone properly:

anim=Instance.new("Animation",workspace)
anim.AnimationId = "http://www.roblox.com/Asset?ID=293536378"
jun = script.Parent.Parent
Stuff = false
local sp = script.Parent
local s = Instance.new("Sound")
s.SoundId = "http://www.roblox.com/asset/?id="
s.Volume = 3
s.Looped = true
s.PlayOnRemove = false
s.Parent = sp

function ssj()
    s:Play()
    game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"It's kaioken time!",Enum.ChatColor.Red)
    game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"I will show you my real power now.",Enum.ChatColor.Red)
    game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"Prepare yourself!",Enum.ChatColor.Red)
    local Effect = Instance.new("Part")
    Effect.Parent = jun.Character
    Effect.Anchored = true
    Effect.CanCollide = false
    Effect.Rotation = Vector3.new(0, 0, 0)
    Effect.Size = Vector3.new(1, 1, 1)
    Effect.formFactor = "Symmetric"
    Effect.Transparency = 0.5
    Effect.BrickColor = BrickColor.new("Really red")
    Effect.TopSurface = "Smooth"
    Effect.BottomSurface = "Smooth"
    local EffectMesh = Instance.new("SpecialMesh")
    EffectMesh.Parent = Effect
    EffectMesh.MeshType = "FileMesh"
    EffectMesh.MeshId = ("http://www.roblox.com/asset/?id=3270017")
    EffectMesh.Scale = Vector3.new(0, 0, 0)
    local Effect2 = Instance.new("Part")
    Effect2.Parent = jun.Character
    Effect2.Anchored = true
    Effect2.CanCollide = false
    Effect2.Size = Vector3.new(1, 1, 1)
    Effect2.formFactor = "Symmetric"
    Effect2.Transparency = 0.5
    Effect2.BrickColor = BrickColor.new("Really red")
    Effect2.TopSurface = "Smooth"
    Effect2.BottomSurface = "Smooth"
    local EffectMesh2 = Instance.new("SpecialMesh")
    EffectMesh2.Parent = Effect2
    EffectMesh2.MeshType = "Sphere"
    EffectMesh2.Scale = Vector3.new(0, 0, 0)
    local ex = Instance.new("Explosion")
    ex.Position = jun.Character.Torso.Position
    ex.BlastPressure = 0
    ex.Parent = workspace
    jun.Character.Torso.CFrame = jun.Character.Torso.CFrame * CFrame.new(0, 0.1, 0)
    for i = 1 , 20 do
        Effect.CFrame = CFrame.new(jun.Character.Torso.Position)
        Effect2.CFrame = CFrame.new(jun.Character.Torso.Position)
        Effect.Rotation = Effect.Rotation + Vector3.new(2,2,2)*4
        EffectMesh.Scale = EffectMesh.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh.Scale = EffectMesh.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh.Scale = EffectMesh.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh.Scale = EffectMesh.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh.Scale = EffectMesh.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh2.Scale = EffectMesh2.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh2.Scale = EffectMesh2.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh2.Scale = EffectMesh2.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh2.Scale = EffectMesh2.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        EffectMesh2.Scale = EffectMesh2.Scale + Vector3.new(0.5, 0.5, 0.5)
        wait()
        Effect.Transparency = Effect.Transparency + 0.025
        wait(0.06)
        Effect2.Transparency = Effect2.Transparency + 0.025
        wait(0.06)
    end
    Effect:Remove()
    game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"I will defeat you!",Enum.ChatColor.Red)
    Effect = Instance.new("Part")
    Effect.Parent = jun.Character
    Effect.Anchored = true
    Effect.CanCollide = false
    Effect.Size = Vector3.new(1, 1, 1)
    Effect.formFactor = "Symmetric"
    Effect.Transparency = 0.5
    Effect.BrickColor = BrickColor.new("Really red")
    Effect.TopSurface = "Smooth"
    Effect.BottomSurface = "Smooth"
    EffectMesh = Instance.new("SpecialMesh")
    EffectMesh.Parent = Effect
    EffectMesh.MeshType = "FileMesh"
    EffectMesh.MeshId = ("http://www.roblox.com/Asset/?id=9982590")
    EffectMesh.Scale = Vector3.new(5, 5, 5)
    local ex2 = Instance.new("Explosion")
    ex2.Position = jun.Character.Torso.Position
    ex2.BlastPressure = 0
    ex2.Parent = workspace
    jun.Character.Torso.CFrame = jun.Character.Torso.CFrame * CFrame.new(0, 0.1, 0)
    for i = 1 , 20 do
        Effect.CFrame = CFrame.new(jun.Character.Torso.Position)
        EffectMesh.Scale = EffectMesh.Scale + Vector3.new(2, 2, 2)
        Effect.Transparency = Effect.Transparency + 0.025
        wait(0.06)
    end
    wait(1)
    Effect:Remove()
    game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"RAAAAAA",Enum.ChatColor.Red)
    game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"KAIOKEN!",Enum.ChatColor.Red)
    if Stuff == false then
        Stuff = true
        for u, c in pairs (jun.Character:GetChildren()) do
            if c.className == "Hat" and c.Name ~= "Swordpack" and c.Name ~= "GlassesBlackFrame" then
                c.Handle.Transparency = 1
            end
        end
        if jun.Character.Torso:findFirstChild("PwnFire") == nil then
            local animTrack = jun.Character.Humanoid:LoadAnimation(anim)
            animTrack:Play()  
            wait()
        end
        game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"AAAGH",Enum.ChatColor.Red)
        game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"NNAGHN",Enum.ChatColor.Red)
        if jun.Character.Torso:findFirstChild("PwnSparkles") == nil then
            local fr = game.lighting.ParticleEmitterKaio:clone()
            fr.Parent = jun.Character.Torso
        end
        jun.Character.Humanoid.MaxHealth = 150
        wait(0.3)
        jun.Character.Humanoid.Health = 150
    end
end
function nossj()
    if Stuff == true then
        Stuff = false
        if jun.Character.Torso:findFirstChild("ParticleEmitterKaio")~=nil then
            jun.Character.Torso:findFirstChild("ParticleEmitterKaio"):Remove()
        end
        game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"Ah..",Enum.ChatColor.Green)
        game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(jun.Character.Head,"He was strong!",Enum.ChatColor.Green)
        local p = Instance.new("Part")
        p.Parent = jun.Character
        p.Anchored = true
        p.CanCollide = false
        p.Transparency = 0.1
        p.formFactor = "Symmetric"
        p.Size = Vector3.new(22, 22, 22)
        p.TopSurface = "Smooth"
        p.BottomSurface = "Smooth"
        p.Name = "Sharingan"
        p.Shape = "Ball"
        p.CFrame = jun.Character.Torso.CFrame
        p.BrickColor = BrickColor.new("Really red")
        for i = 1 , 10 do
            wait(0.05)
            p.Size = p.Size + Vector3.new(-4, -4, -4)
            p.Transparency = p.Transparency + 0.1
            p.CFrame = jun.Character.Torso.CFrame
        end
        p:Remove()
        s:Remove()
        for u, c in pairs (jun.Character:GetChildren()) do
            if c.className == "Hat" and c.Name ~= "Swordpack" and c.Name ~= "GlassesBlackFrame" then
                c.Handle.Transparency = 0
            end
            if c.Name == "Hair" then
                c:Remove()
            end
        end
        jun.Character.Humanoid.Health = 100
        wait(0.3)
        jun.Character.Humanoid.MaxHealth = 100
    end
end
jun.Chatted:connect(function(Msg)
    local msg = Msg:lower()
    if string.sub(msg, 1, 7) == "kaioken" then
        wait(0.1)
        ssj()
    end
    if string.sub(msg, 1, 13) == "kaio" then
        wait(0.1)
        ssj()
    end
    if string.sub(msg, 1, 6) == "!" then
        wait(0.1)
        ssj()
    end
    if string.sub(msg, 1, 10) == "calm" then
        wait(0.1)
        nossj()
    end
    if string.sub(msg, 1, 3) == "off" then
        wait(0.1)
        nossj()
    end
end)
function OnDeath()
    wait()
    nossj()
end
hum = jun.Character.Humanoid
jun.Character.Humanoid.Died:connect(OnDeath)
jun = script.Parent.Parent
Stuff = false

And here's the localscript that clones the normal scipt:

local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer

script.Parent.MouseButton1Click:Connect(function()
    local kamehascript = game.ReplicatedStorage.Transformations.Kaio:Clone()
    kamehascript.Parent = player.Backpack
    print("Received the Skill!")
end)

Thanks in advance!