Not Teleporting Players... why? Cleaner version

I am making a mingame game and I can't teleport players to the right place. TF firing is for Intermission, it changes the Timer every second . FloodItIs is a teleportation place for the minigame to begin. Result is the result of math.Random to choose between minigames this code:

math.Random(Vector3.new(258 or 248 or 238, 248, 258 or 248 or 238))

is for the swordfights mingame and flooditis is for the flood Escape minigame once All of the players ScreenGuis show 0 then It will start the code

PS if their is a better or cleaner way to make the timer too, it would be helpful if you mentioned it i dont know how to use Cframe well so please tell me if i have errors code is below

code in starter player scripts local script

local RS = game:GetService("ReplicatedStorage")
local TF = RS:WaitForChild("TimeForever")
local TD = RS:WaitForChild("TD")
local function Time(Part)
    game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.ScreenGui.TextLabel.Text -=1
    if game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.ScreenGui.TextLabel.Text == 0 and RS.Value == ("Lobby") then
        local PN = script.Parent.Parent
        game.Workspace(PN.Name).HumanoidRootPart.CFrame = Part.CFrame
        PN:FindFirstChild("Roblox").Value = ("Start")   
    end
end


TF.OnClientEvent:Connect(Time)

code in serverscript service regular script:

local Players = game.Players:GetPlayers()
local GS = game.ReplicatedStorage.GameStatus
local RS = game:GetService("ReplicatedStorage")
local TF = RS.TimeForever
GS.Value = ("Lobby")
repeat 
    wait() 
until #game.Players:GetPlayers() == 1
repeat 
    TF:FireAllClients(TF) 
    wait(1) 
    for i, v in pairs(game.Players:GetPlayers()) do 
        local R = v:FindFirstChild("Roblox")
        if not R == "Start" and i == #game.Players:GetPlayers() then 

        else if R == "Start" then
                local Result = math.Random(1,2)
                if Result == 1 then
                for i, v in pairs(Players) do
                        game.Workspace(v.name).CFrame = math.Random(Vector3.new(258 or 248 or 238, 248, 258 or 248 or 238))
                        end
                elseif Result == 2 then
                    for i, v in pairs (Players) do 
                        game.Workspace(v.name).CFrame = game.Workspace.FloodItis.CFrame
                    end
                end
            end
        end
    end
until #game.Players:GetPlayers() == 0