Why It doesn't teleport all players?

I am making a mingame game and I can't teleport players to the right place, here is the code

Code in StarterPlayerScripts: local RS = game:GetService("ReplicatedStorage") local TF = RS:WaitForChild("TimeForever") local TD = RS:WaitForChild("TD") local function Time(Part) game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.ScreenGui.TextLabel.Text -=1 if game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.ScreenGui.TextLabel.Text == 0 and RS.Value == ("Lobby") then local PN = script.Parent.Parent game.Workspace(PN.Name).HumanoidRootPart.CFrame = Part.CFrame PN:FindFirstChild("Roblox").Value = ("Start")
end end

TF.OnClientEvent:Connect(Time)

code in normal scripts in serverScriptService: local Players = game.Players:GetPlayers() local GS = game.ReplicatedStorage.GameStatus local RS = game:GetService("ReplicatedStorage") local TF = RS.TimeForever GS.Value = ("Lobby") repeat wait() until #game.Players:GetPlayers() == 1 repeat TF:FireAllClients(TF) wait(1) for i, v in pairs(game.Players:GetPlayers()) do local R = v:FindFirstChild("Roblox") if not R == "Start" and i == #game.Players:GetPlayers() then

    else if R == "Start" then
            local Result = math.Random(1,2)
            if Result == 1 then
            for i, v in pairs(Players) do
                    game.Workspace(v.name).CFrame = math.Random(Vector3.new(258 or 248 or 238, 248, 258 or 248 or 238))
                    end
            elseif Result == 2 then
                for i, v in pairs (Players) do 
                    game.Workspace(v.name).CFrame = game.Workspace.FloodItis.CFrame
                end
            end
        end
    end
end

until #game.Players:GetPlayers() == 0 . TF firing is for Intermission, it changes the Timer every second FloodItIs is a teleportation place for the minigame to begin Result is the result of math.Random to choose between minigames this code: math.Random(Vector3.new(258 or 248 or 238, 248, 258 or 248 or 238)) is for the swordfights mingame and flooditis is for the flood Escape minigame once All of the players ScreenGuis show 0 then It will start the code

PS if their is a better or cleaner way to make the timer too, it would be helpful if you mentioned it

i dont know how to use Cframe well so please tell me if i have errors