Why is my GUI Script Not Working? (Please Help!)

My GUI Script isn't working, the GUI sits in front of the players face without moving the whole game and then disconnects the player. This is the Custom Loading Screen Script:

script.Parent:RemoveDefaultLoadingScreen()

local screen = Instance.new("ScreenGui") screen.Parent = game.Players.LocalPlayer:WaitForChild("PlayerGui")

local textLabel = Instance.new("TextLabel") textLabel.Parent = screen textLabel.Text = "Loading Game" textLabel.Size = UDim2.new(1,0,1,0) textLabel.FontSize = Enum.FontSize.Size200

local count = 0 while game.ContentProvider.RequestQueueSize > 0 do textLabel.Text = "Loading Game" for i=1,count do textLabel.Text = textLabel.Text .. "." end count = (count + 1) % 4 wait(.3) end

screen.Parent = nil