Whats wrong with this dorm Room Script?

Im trying to make it, where it Inserts the player who touched the Brick 'Invisi' into a list that will allow it to open the door, and it isnt Letting me, No errors.

function onClicked (playerWhoClicked)
    local owner = { }
for _,v in pairs(game.Workspace.floor:GetChildren()) do
v["Claim Dorm"].Invisi.Touched:connect(function(hit)
    for _,l in pairs(game.Players:GetChildren())do
        if hit.Parent then
            local humanoid = l.Character:findFirstChild("Humanoid")
            if humanoid then
                script.Parent.Parent.Name = l.Name.."'s Dorm"
                table.insert(l.Name, #owner)
            end
            end
    end
    script.Parent.CanCollide = false
    script.Parent.Parent["Smooth Block Model"].CanCollide = false
    wait(5)
    script.Parent.CanCollide = true
    script.Parent.Parent["Smooth Block Model"].CanCollide = true
end)
end


end

script.Parent.ClickDetector.MouseClick:connect(onClicked)