Why isn't my code working but no error and it should be correct code?

I am making a piggy inspired game from scratch will the help of my friend, and he is the builder. I am the programmer of the game, and I am having some difficulties in my system that detects if the game is over or not. If the timer runs out it is over. If everyone dies or leaves the game, the round is over. If the slayer dies or leaves the game, the round is over. The timer part works completely fine, but the other 2 options work and don’t work. They work very well if you are doing 1 player, but not that good when multiple players get selected. I have gone over my code a bunch of times, and I even tried making it double-check, and still nothing. Voting works fine, but this glitch only happens when a player is selected and not a bot. Here is my round system code:

while true do
    for i, v in pairs(game.Players:GetChildren()) do
        v.Character.Humanoid.Health = v.Character.Humanoid.MaxHealth -- Makes sure the player's health is full
    end
    for i = 45, 0, -1 do
        game.ReplicatedStorage.Status.Value = "<ContainerHorizontalAlignment=Center><AnimateStepFrequency=0>Intermission: <AnimateStyle=Fade><AnimateStyleTime=0.25><Color=Green>" .. i  -- I used rich text module made by defaultio
        wait(1)
    end
    local slayer
    local gameOver = false
    local slayerLeft = false
    local players = game.Players:GetChildren() -- a table listing all of the players that we will put into the round
    local chosenMode = "Player"
    local numPlayers = #game.Players:GetChildren() -- the number of players
    for i, v in pairs(players) do -- Doesn't add the player to the round if they are still loading
        if not v.Character then
            numPlayers = numPlayers - 1
            table.remove(players, i)
        end
    end
    if numPlayers == 1 or #players == 1 then -- Automatically chooses bot if only 1 player in the server
        chosenMode = "Bot"
    else
        if #game.ReplicatedStorage.BotVote:GetChildren() > #game.ReplicatedStorage.PlayerVote:GetChildren() then
            chosenMode = "Bot"
        else
            chosenMode = "Player"
            numPlayers = numPlayers - 1
        end
    end
    if chosenMode == "Player" then
        slayer = game.Players:GetChildren()[math.random(1, #game.Players:GetChildren())] -- Choosing slayer is not the problem btw
    else
        slayer = game.ServerStorage.Bots.Bot:Clone()
    end
    for i, v in pairs(players) do
        if v.Name == slayer.Name then -- Removes the slayer from the player table
            table.remove(players, i)
        end
        v.Character.Humanoid.WalkSpeed = 16 + v.ExtraSpeed.Value -- Faster speed gamepass thing
        v.Character.Humanoid.Died:Connect(function() -- if player died, it will remove them from the players table
            table.remove(players, i)
            numPlayers = numPlayers - 1
            print(v, "Died!")
            if v.Character:FindFirstChildOfClass("Tool") then -- puts the tools back where they found it.
                game.ServerStorage.Tools:FindFirstChild(v.Character:FindFirstChildOfClass("Tool").Name).Parent = game.Workspace.CurrentMap.Keys
                v.Character:FindFirstChildOfClass("Tool"):Destroy()
            end
            if v.Backpack:FindFirstChildOfClass("Tool") then
                game.ServerStorage.Tools:FindFirstChild(v.Backpack:FindFirstChildOfClass("Tool").Name).Parent = game.Workspace.CurrentMap.Keys
                v.Backpack:FindFirstChildOfClass("Tool"):Destroy()
            end
        end)
    end
    game.ReplicatedStorage.Escape.OnServerEvent:Connect(function(player) -- if player escapes, they will be removed from the players table
        print(player, "Escaped")
        numPlayers = numPlayers - 1
        game.BadgeService:AwardBadge(player.UserId, 2124534311)
        player.Points.Value = player.Points.Value + (35 * player.Multiplier.Value)
        for i, v in pairs(players) do
            if v == player then
                table.remove(players, i)
            end
        end
    end)
    game.Players.PlayerRemoving:Connect(function(player)
        if player == slayer then -- resets game if slayer left
            players = {}
            gameOver = true
            slayerLeft = true
        else
            for i, v in pairs(players) do
                if v == player then
                    table.remove(players, i)
                end
            end
        end
    end)
    if chosenMode == "Player" then -- resets the game if the slayer died
        slayer.Character.Humanoid.Died:Connect(function()
            gameOver = true
            slayerLeft = true
        end)
    end
    game.ReplicatedStorage.Status.Value = "<ContainerHorizontalAlignment=Center><AnimateStepFrequency=0.05><AnimateStyle=Fade><AnimateStyleTime=0.25><Color=Red>" .. slayer.Name .. "<Color=/> has been selected as<Color=Red> Slayer!<Color=/>" -- some more rich text
    wait(5)
    local map = game.ServerStorage.Maps.House:Clone()
    map.Parent = game.Workspace
    map.Name = "CurrentMap"
    game.ReplicatedStorage.Status.Value = "<ContainerHorizontalAlignment=Center><AnimateStepFrequency=0.05><AnimateStyle=Fade><AnimateStyleTime=0.25>Loading Map..."
    wait(5)
    game.ReplicatedStorage.Fade:FireAllClients(true)
    wait(2)
    game.ReplicatedStorage.Fade:FireAllClients(false)
    game.ReplicatedStorage.HideShop:FireAllClients(false)
    wait(0.1)
    if chosenMode == "Player" then
        game.ReplicatedStorage.Backpack:FireClient(slayer, false) -- hides the slayer's backpack
    end
    for i, v in pairs(players) do
        game.ReplicatedStorage.Intro:FireClient(v)
    end
    game.ReplicatedStorage.Intro:FireClient(slayer)
    for i, v in pairs(players) do -- for the intro
        if v.Character then
            pcall(function()
                v.Character:SetPrimaryPartCFrame(CFrame.new(266.253, -29.26, -93.261) * CFrame.Angles(0, math.rad(90), 0))
            end)
        end
    end
    wait(30)
    game.Workspace.GameTimeMusic:Play()
    if chosenMode == "Player" then -- changes player to the slayer skin
        skin = game.ServerStorage.Skins:FindFirstChild(slayer.Equip.Value):Clone()
        skin.Name = slayer.Name
        slayer.Character = skin
        skin.Parent = game.Workspace
        slayer.Character:SetPrimaryPartCFrame(CFrame.new(339.263, 4, 205.29))
        skin.Humanoid.WalkSpeed = 16 + slayer.ExtraSpeed.Value
    end
    for i, v in pairs(players) do
        if v.Name ~= slayer.Name then
            pcall(function()
                v.Character:SetPrimaryPartCFrame(map.Spawn.CFrame)
            end)
        end
    end
    game.ReplicatedStorage.CurrentSlayer.Value = slayer.Name
    for i = 480, 0, -1 do -- timer system
        local timer = math.floor(i / 60) .. ":" .. i % 60
        if i % 60 < 10 then
            timer = math.floor(i / 60) .. ":0" .. i % 60
        end
        if i == 450 then
            if chosenMode == "Player" then
                slayer.Character:SetPrimaryPartCFrame(map.Spawn.CFrame)
            else
                slayer.Parent = game.Workspace
                slayer:SetPrimaryPartCFrame(map.Spawn.CFrame)
            end
        end
        game.ReplicatedStorage.Status.Value = "<ContainerHorizontalAlignment=Center><AnimateStepFrequency=0>Game Time: <AnimateStyle=Fade><AnimateStyleTime=0.25><Color=Green>" .. timer
        wait(1)
        if #players == 0 then
            gameOver = true
        end
        if numPlayers == 0 then
            gameOver = true
        end
        if gameOver then -- resets game if gameOver is set to true
            break
        end
    end
    game.Workspace.GameTimeMusic:Stop()
    game.ReplicatedStorage.Status.Value = "<ContainerHorizontalAlignment=Center><AnimateStepFrequency=0.05><AnimateStyle=Fade><AnimateStyleTime=0.25>Game Over!"
    wait(3)
    game.ReplicatedStorage.Backpack:FireAllClients(true)
    game.Workspace.TrapsPlacement:ClearAllChildren()
    map:Destroy()
    if not slayerLeft then
        if chosenMode == "Player" then -- turns player back to normal if slayer
            slayer:LoadCharacter()
            skin:Destroy()
        else
            slayer:Destroy()
        end
    end
    game.ReplicatedStorage.CurrentSlayer.Value = ""
    game.ReplicatedStorage.HideShop:FireAllClients(true)
    for i, v in pairs(players) do -- teleports players back to the lobby
        if v then
            v.Character:MoveTo(game.Workspace:FindFirstChild("SpawnLocation" .. math.random(1, 3)).Position)
        end
    end
    game.ReplicatedStorage.BotVote:ClearAllChildren()
    game.ReplicatedStorage.PlayerVote:ClearAllChildren()
    game.ServerStorage.Tools:ClearAllChildren()
end

I just cannot figure out why it doesn’t work. I sometimes found that if a player dies it sometimes doesn’t do anything. Is the script not efficient or is it an error? I can’t seem to know!