[help wanted] how to fix this? (i've had multible attempts all have failed)

i have tried removing )'s adding )'s removing ends and adding ends and every single time it comes up with a new error and I don't know how to fix it and I need it to continue my game

Code:

--The Start
local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local character = player.Character.ChildAdded
local players = game:GetService("Players")

function onPlayerAdded(plr)
    print(plr.Name .. " joined the game!")
    player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "*Snorre* *Snoree*"
    wait(3)
    player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "AH! I didn't see you there why must you wake me?"
    wait(3)
    player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "YOU DIDN'T MEAN TOO!?"
    wait(3)
    player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "YOU JUST CAME IN HERE AND AWOKE ME FROM MY SLUMBER!!"
    wait(5)
    player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Anyways now that you *spit* are here why dont you give me freedom from this place."
    wait(6)
    player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Who am I? I am the 1??????????3???????????????????E?????????????????????????? ?????????????????7??????????????{??????????????????D??????????????`?????????????????????\????????????????????????????????."
    wait(3)
    player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "How you ask? I DON'T KNOW, FIND SOMETHING!"
    --Getting Dynamite
    workspace.Barrier:Destroy()
    print("Get Dynamite")
    character:Connect(function(Dynamite)
        player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Dynamite, PERFECT! Now go explode those rocks"
        wait(3)
        player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Behind them is the Great Museum."

        workspace.ChildRemoved:Connect(function(Detect)
            if Detect.Name == "DetectionZone" then
                player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "YES!, YES! FINALLY!"
                wait(3)
                player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Okay now go outside from the door infront of you."

            workspace.ChildRemoved:Connect(function(DetectII)
                if DetectII.Name == "DetectionZone2" then
                player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "YES!, YES! FINALLY!"
                wait(3)
                player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Okay now go outside from the door infront of you."
            end
        end)
    end)
end


players.PlayerAdded:Connect(onPlayerAdded)

for _, player in pairs(players:GetPlayers()) do
    onPlayerAdded(player)
end