Why won't the script create the screengui in my players player gui?

I already asked a question about this but it went unanswered

heres my code:

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(plr)
plr:WaitForChild("PlayerGui")
local gui = Instance.new("ScreenGui")
gui.Parent = plr.PlayerGui
	gui.Name = "Main"
	wait(1)
	local frame = Instance.new("Frame")
	frame.Parent = gui
	wait(1)
	local Text = Instance.new("TextLabel")
	Text.Parent = gui
	Text.Name = "Load"
	wait(5)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Visible = true
	wait(0.1)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 7%"
	wait(0.5)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 13%"
	wait(0.3)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 20%"
	wait(0.5)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading 27%"
	wait(0.3)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 33%"
	wait(0.5)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 40%"
	wait(0.3)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 47%"
	wait(0.5)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 53%"
	wait(0.3)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 60%"
	wait(0.5)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 67%"
	wait(0.3)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 74%"
	wait(0.5)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 83%"
	wait(0.3)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 95%"
	wait(0.5)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "[Loading] 100%"
	wait(0.3)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = "Loading Complete!"
	wait(0.5)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 0.2
	wait(0.1)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 0.4
	wait(0.1)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 0.6
	wait(0.1)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 0.8
	wait(0.1)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 1
	wait(0.1)
		plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load.Text = ""
	wait(0.1)
	plr.PlayerGui.Main.Load:remove()
	wait(0.1)
	game.ServerStorage.Team:Clone().Parent = plr.PlayerGui
end)

Sorry, but I couldn't comment :(

I think the problem is because Text is not scaled/sized, and it makes it hard to see.

Well, you did have alot of errors.

Now all you pretty much have to do is position the gui's correctly. Here's the fixed script.

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(plr)
plr:WaitForChild("PlayerGui")
local gui = Instance.new("ScreenGui", plr.PlayerGui)
    gui.Name = "Main"
    wait(1)
    local frame = Instance.new("Frame", gui)
    wait(1)
    local Lab = Instance.new("TextLabel", frame)
    Lab.Name = "Load"
    wait(5)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Visible = true
    wait(0.1)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 7%"
    wait(0.5)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 13%"
    wait(0.3)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 20%"
    wait(0.5)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading 27%"
    wait(0.3)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 33%"
    wait(0.5)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 40%"
    wait(0.3)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 47%"
    wait(0.5)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 53%"
    wait(0.3)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 60%"
    wait(0.5)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 67%"
    wait(0.3)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 74%"
    wait(0.5)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 83%"
    wait(0.3)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 95%"
    wait(0.5)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "[Loading] 100%"
    wait(0.3)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = "Loading Complete!"
    wait(0.5)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 0.2
    wait(0.1)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 0.4
    wait(0.1)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 0.6
    wait(0.1)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 0.8
    wait(0.1)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.BackgroundTransparency = 1
    wait(0.1)
        plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load.Text = ""
    wait(0.1)
    plr.PlayerGui.Main.Frame.Load:remove()
    wait(0.1)
    game.ServerStorage.Team:Clone().Parent = plr.PlayerGui
end)