Can anyone check my script is wrote correctly?

Rebirth Gui [local script]

local stats = game.Players.LocalPlayer.leaderstats
script.Parent.MouseButton1Click:connect(function()
    if stats.LifeFormFound.Value >= 10 then
        game.Players.LocalPlayer.leaderstats.LifeFormFound.Value = 0
        game.Players.LocalPlayer.leaderstats.Rebirth.Value = game.Players.LocalPlayer.leaderstats.Rebirth.Value +1          
    else
        game.Players.LocalPlayer.leaderstats.LifeFormFound.Value = game.Players.LocalPlayer.leaderstats.LifeFormFound.Value
        game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.RebirthFail.Frame.Visible = true
        wait(3)
        game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.RebirthFail.Frame.Visible = false
    end
end)

Text Button Gui

script.Parent.MouseButton1Click:connect(function()
    script.Parent.Parent.Frame.Visible = true
end)

Text Button Gui

script.Parent.MouseButton1Click:connect(function()
    script.Parent.Parent.Visible = false
end)

Text Button Gui

script.Parent.MouseButton1Click:Connect(function(Player)
        if game.Players.LocalPlayer.leaderstats.LifeFormFound.Value >= 2000 then  
         game.Players.LocalPlayer.Character.LowerTorso.CFrame = CFrame.new(workspace.Point.Position)
        game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.TestGui.Frame.Visible = true
        wait(3)
        game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.TestGui.Frame.Visible = false
        else game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.TestGui2.Frame.Visible = true
        wait(3)
        game.Players.LocalPlayer.PlayerGui.TestGui2.Frame.Visible = false
        end
        end)

Brick OnTouch Script

local Part = script.Parent

Part.Touched:connect(function(HIT)
    local H = HIT.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")
    if H then
        local Player = game.Players:GetPlayerFromCharacter(HIT.Parent)
        Player.PlayerGui.ScreenGuiDirtBlock.Frame.Visible = true
wait(0.5)
Player.PlayerGui.ScreenGuiDirtBlock.Frame.Visible = false
    end
end)