Why do my two scripts work in studio's test mode but not in actual online gameplay?

Edit: Fixed script indenting I think Edit 2: I'm pretty sure the problem is in the "hurt" script, but I put the attack script in just in case. Edit 3: Made indenting a little better. Sorry! D:

There are two scripts here: an attack script in StarterPack and a hurt script in a model in the workspace. What's supposed to happen is when the player attacks, a "state" value inside the character changes to 1, and the hurt script detects if there is a humanoid and the state is = 1, and kills the enemy. However, this only seems to work when playing in studio. Here are the two scripts:

attack (in StarterPack) (it's a modified double jump script)

wait(5)
local plyr = game.Players.LocalPlayer

plyr.Character:WaitForChild("Humanoid")
db=false
j=0
local InputKey = "E"
deb=false
J1=false
J2=false
local UserInputService = game:GetService("UserInputService")
char = plyr.Character
UserInputService.InputBegan:connect(function(UserInput)
	if UserInput.UserInputType == Enum.UserInputType.Keyboard then

		if UserInput.KeyCode == Enum.KeyCode[InputKey] and J1==true and deb==false and j==1 and plyr.Character.Torso.Velocity.Y~=0 and db==false then
			j=2
			deb=true
			plyr.Character.Torso.Velocity=plyr.Character.Torso.CFrame.lookVector*30 + Vector3.new(0,30,0)
			local pe=script.ParticleEmitter:Clone()
			pe.Parent=plyr.Character.Torso
			script.Sound:Play()
			local w = plyr.Character.Humanoid:LoadAnimation(script:WaitForChild("Animation"))
			wait(0.1)
			pe.Enabled = false
			local state = plyr.Character:WaitForChild("state")
			state.Value = "1"
			print("attack is in the character")
			w:Play()
			repeat wait() until script.Sound.IsPlaying == false
			w:Stop()
			pe:Destroy()
			state.Value = "0"
			print("attack was removed")
			J2=true
			deb=false
		end
	end
end)

function D()
	if  J1==false then
		db=true
		J1=true
		j=1
		db=false
	end
end
plyr.Character.Humanoid.Jumping:connect(D)

while wait() do
	if plyr.Character.Torso.Velocity.Y>-.1 and plyr.Character.Torso.Velocity.Y<.1 then
		J1=false
		j=0
	end
end

hurt (inside of a Part in a Model)

debounce = true
function onTouched(hit)
	local hh = hit.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")
		if hh ~= nil then
			hit.Parent:WaitForChild("state")
				if hit.Parent.state.Value == 1 then
					print("found value = 1")
					local	qwe = Instance.new("IntValue")
					qwe.Name = "attacked"
					qwe.Parent = script.Parent
						if debounce == true then
							if	script.Parent.attacked ~= nil then
								print("attacking human found")
								debounce = false
								script.Parent.Parent.Script.Disabled = true
								script.Parent.Parent.Animate.Disabled = true
								local w = script.Parent.Parent.Humanoid:LoadAnimation(script.Parent.Parent.die)
								w:Play()
								script.Parent.hurts:Play()
								script.Parent.BeautifulSparkles.Enabled=true
								wait(1)
								script.Parent.BeautifulSparkles.Enabled=false
								script.Parent.Parent.Parent.cloud.Script.Disabled = false
								script.Parent.Sound:Play()
								wait(1)
								script.Parent.Transparency = 1
								script.Parent.PointLight:Destroy()
								script.Parent.Decal.Transparency = 1
								script.Parent.Parent.LowerLeg1.Transparency = 1
								script.Parent.Parent.LowerJoint1.Transparency = 1
								script.Parent.Parent.UpperLeg1.Transparency = 1
								script.Parent.Parent.Torso.Transparency = 1
								wait(1)
								debounce = true
							end
						end
				end
				else
				print("touched but not attacked")
		end
end
script.Parent.Touched:connect(onTouched)

Also, I'm a noob scripter so if the answer is super obvious then good for you, I guess.