DataStore Isn't Loading Into Another Game Properly?

Hello,

[SUBJECT]: Me and my dev team are making a 2-game based DataStore system, basically where one game that creates all the Data and sets the Data (aka, the Loading Menu), then loads into the other game to Async the data from the Menu (aka, the Park).

[ERROR]: Basically, I honestly don't know what the error is, but all I know is from using an in-game explorer or checking the output.

[MENU DATASTORE]:

local Player
local DataVersion = "Version 3"

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(NPlayer)
    Player = game:GetService('Players').LocalPlayer
    --local as = tostring(NPlayer)
    repeat wait() until Player.Character
    local vs = script:WaitForChild("Inventory"):clone()
    --local ui = script:WaitForChild('BillboardGui'):Clone()
    vs.Name = NPlayer.UserId
    vs.Parent = NPlayer
    --ui.Parent = workspace[as].UpperTorso
    NPlayer:LoadCharacter()
    local Stats = vs:GetChildren()
        local S1 = {}
        for i=1,#Stats do
            local n = Stats[i].Name
            S1[n] = Stats[i].Value
        end
    if NPlayer.Name ~= "Player" then
        local DataStore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore(DataVersion,NPlayer.UserId)
    if DataStore:GetAsync("Stats") == nil then
                DataStore:SetAsync("Stats", S1)
            end
            S1 = DataStore:GetAsync("Stats")
    end
    local vv = vs:GetChildren()
        for i=1,#vv do
            local n = vv[i].Name
            if S1[n] ~= nil then
                vv[i].Value = S1[n]
            end
        end 

--[[while wait() do
if not Player.Character.UpperTorso:FindFirstChild('BillboardGui') then
    ui.Parent = workspace[as].UpperTorso
end
end--]]
end)

game.Players.PlayerRemoving:connect(function(p)
    local DataStore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore(DataVersion,p.UserId)
    local Stats = p:FindFirstChild(""..p.UserId..""):GetChildren()
    local S1 = {}
    for i=1,#Stats do
        local n = Stats[i].Name
        S1[n] = Stats[i].Value
    end
    DataStore:SetAsync("Stats",S1)
end)

--[[game.ReplicatedStorage.Events.SaveData.OnServerEvent:connect(function(SaveData)
    local DataStore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore(DataVersion,Player.UserId)
    local Stats = Player:FindFirstChild(""..Player.UserId..""):GetChildren()
    local s1 = game.ReplicatedStorage.DataInfo.Data
    print'saving data'
    for i=1,#Stats do
        local n = Stats[i].Name
        s1[n] = Stats[i].Value
    end
    DataStore:SetAsync("Stats",s1)
    print'saved data'
end)--]]

[PARK DATASTORE]

local Player
local DataVersion = "Version 3"

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(NPlayer)
    Player = game:GetService('Players').LocalPlayer
    --local as = tostring(NPlayer)
    repeat wait() until Player.Character
    local vs = script:WaitForChild("Inventory"):clone()
    --local ui = script:WaitForChild('BillboardGui'):Clone()
    vs.Name = NPlayer.UserId
    vs.Parent = NPlayer
    --ui.Parent = workspace[as].UpperTorso
    NPlayer:LoadCharacter()
    local Stats = vs:GetChildren()
        local S1 = {}
        for i=1,#Stats do
            local n = Stats[i].Name
            S1[n] = Stats[i].Value
        end
    if NPlayer.Name ~= "Player" then
        local DataStore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore(DataVersion,NPlayer.UserId)
    if DataStore:GetAsync("Stats") == nil then
                DataStore:SetAsync("Stats", S1)
            end
            S1 = DataStore:GetAsync("Stats")
    end
    local vv = vs:GetChildren()
        for i=1,#vv do
            local n = vv[i].Name
            if S1[n] ~= nil then
                vv[i].Value = S1[n]
            end
        end 

--[[while wait() do
if not Player.Character.UpperTorso:FindFirstChild('BillboardGui') then
    ui.Parent = workspace[as].UpperTorso
end
end--]]
end)

game.Players.PlayerRemoving:connect(function(p)
    local DataStore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore(DataVersion,p.UserId)
    local Stats = p:FindFirstChild(""..p.UserId..""):GetChildren()
    local S1 = {}
    for i=1,#Stats do
        local n = Stats[i].Name
        S1[n] = Stats[i].Value
    end
    DataStore:SetAsync("Stats",S1)
end)

If you can help, please respond on here, or contact me on Discord. Discord: Resplendid#2571