Torso Not Valid Member of Model?

REALLY Confused on this, Been going around on posts but nothing as fixed this for me. It works FLAWLESSLY on Studio but NON of my Local Scripts in StarterGui dont activate. Any help is appreciated. My Freeze Script for a "start" button

local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local Target = player.Character.Torso
local Cam = workspace.Camera
local char = player.Character
if not character or not character.Parent then
    character = player.CharacterAdded:wait()
end
local torso = char:FindFirstChild("Torso")
local hum = char:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")
Cam.CameraType = Enum.CameraType.Scriptable
Cam.CameraSubject = player.Character.Torso
while true do
Cam.CoordinateFrame = CFrame.new(Target.Position) * CFrame.Angles(0,3.2,0) * CFrame.new(-2,0,5)

	wait(0.1)
end

Still need help :( would appreciate it if you looked at comments. Also I tried to update the script with waitforchild, and it did not help, I updated the script with Character Added and it did not work either. Game is Filtered enabled.

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(player)
	player.CharacterAdded:connect(function(character)
	local part = game.Players.LocalPlayer.Character:WaitForChild("Torso")
	print(part.Name .. " added to workspace")
	local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
	local nameofplayer = player.Character.Name
	if player and player.Character then
		local Target = game.Players.LocalPlayer.Character.Torso
		local Cam = workspace.Camera
		local char = player.Character
		if not character or not character.Parent then
    	character = player.CharacterAdded:wait()
		end
	local torso = char:FindFirstChild("Torso")
	Cam.CameraType = Enum.CameraType.Scriptable
	Cam.CameraSubject = player.Character.Torso
	while true do
	Cam.CoordinateFrame = CFrame.new(Target.Position) * CFrame.Angles(0,3.2,0) * CFrame.new(-2,0,5)

		wait(0.1)
	end
	end
end)
end)