How do I get how many player's are online in a game by using a script?

You can do this without datastores by using this api

Whilst that is an internal API and therefore you'll have to use a proxy to access it ingame, you can use that to loop through each page and get the amount of players.

Here's an example.

-- api to get information from
local api = "myapi?placeid=0"
-- index of what page we're on - increments by 10 each time
local index = 0
-- amount of players we've counted
local result = 0
-- the last request we got
local lastRequest

repeat
	-- get the page with the index we have
	local request = game.HttpService:GetAsync(api .."&startIndex=".. index)
	-- decode it from json into a lua dictionary
	request = game.HttpService:JsonDecode(request)
	-- loop through the collection from the request (the servers)
	for i,v in pairs(request.Collection) do
		-- add to the result the amount of players in that server
		result = result + tonumber(#v.CurrentPlayers)
	end
	-- set the last request to this request
	lastRequest = request
	-- increase the index by 10
	index = index + 10
-- repeat until the amount of servers in the request is equal to zero
until #lastRequest.Collection == 0
-- output the amount of players we discovered
print("There are currently ".. result .. " players in this game!")