Is this the right script to pick somewone randomly from Players to be a monster?

Heres my script:

local Dominator = script.Parent.Parent
local DominatorChance = Players[math.random(1,10)]
local Name = "Your The Dominator!"..player.Name..""



if player == "Dominator" then
	script.Parent.Health = 1000
	script.Parent.MaxHealth = 1000
	script.Parent.WalkSpeed = 60
and
    script.Parent:GetChildren()
	
end

local Fighter = script.Parent.Parent
local playerin = Game:GetService("Players")
local chance = Players[math.random(1,10)]


if Player == "Fighter" then
	script.Parent:GetChildren()
	script.Parent.Parent.Name = "The Fighter is"..player.Name..""
	
	
	
end

is this also right?