VIP script not working?

VIP = game.Workspace.VIP

TShirt = game.Workspace.TShirt
ID = TShirt.Graphic

function onTouched(hit)
	game.Workspace.Players:GetPlayers("Torso")
	game.Workspace.Players:GetPlayers("Humanoid")
	if Players.TShirt.ID "http://www.roblox.com/The-Games-VIP-T-shirt-item?id=154826128" == true then
		VIP.Transparency = 1
		VIP.CanCollide = false
		wait(2)
		VIP.Transparency = 0
		VIP.CanCollide = true
	else
		if Players.TShirt.ID "http://www.roblox.com/The-Games-VIP-T-shirt-item?id=154826128" == false then
			Players.Humanoid.Health = 0
		end
		end
	end

It's so like, if you have the T shirt, you have the VIP. If you don't you die if you try to go through it. No errors. Just not doing it. Why?

On line 10, and 16, you have an error. The ID property is not a bool value, so true and false does nothing. Try replacing those with this:

 if Players.TShirt.ID == "URL Here" then

and if you want it false, you would use ~= , aka "Doesnt equal to"

>= -- Greater than or equal to
<= -- Less than or equal to
>/< -- Greater than / Less than
== -- Equal to
~= -- Doesn't equal to