Is This Teleportation Script Wrong?

I'm trying to make a script where if a Player clicked on a part(TeleDoor), it'd teleport them to another place:

game.Workspace.TeleDoor.onClicked.ClickDetector(
	game:GetService("TeleportService"):Teleport(154300059, 
		game.Players.LocalPlayer.Character)

)

I think this script is wrong, but then again, I don't because it doesn't have a red line under it... Help?

Just because there is no red line doesn't mean that the script will be guaranteed to work.

This is a script inside the ClickDetector inside the 'TeleDoor'

local function onMouseClick(Player)
game:GetService("TeleportService"):Teleport(154300059,Player)
end
script.Parent.MouseClick:connect(onMouseClick)