Why will this script not remove the control from the player?

I am using this script, copies strait from the wiki page 'http://wiki.roblox.com/index.php?title=Controlling_a_Player%27s_Character', and I am activating it with a remote event so that when a character touches a part, they are moved to a location and cannot cancel the script by moving, however no matter what, the player is still able to move.

Here is the script I am using to trigger the localscript on touch:

local event = Instance.new("RemoteEvent",game.ReplicatedStorage)
event.Name = "removedControl"

script.Parent.Touched:connect(function(hit)
local player = game.Players:GetPlayerFromCharacter(hit.Parent)
if player then
event:FireClient(player,player)
end
end)

and here is the local script used to move the player and remove their control:

	local event = game.ReplicatedStorage:WaitForChild("removedControl")
local controllers = {} -- Create a table to store the controllers in
local keysDown = {} -- Create a table to store all the key presses in
local keyDown = false
local mouse = game.Players.LocalPlayer:GetMouse() -- Luckily the KeyDown (and up) events will work on keys that are assigned to Roblox hot-keys while using PlayerMouse
	event.OnClientEvent:connect(function(p)
function removeControl()
	repeat wait() until not keyDown -- Wait until no keys are being pressed (keyDown will be changed farther into the script)
	for _, controller in pairs(game:GetService("ControllerService"):GetChildren()) do
		controller.Parent = nil -- Take the controller out of ControllerService
		table.insert(controllers, controller) -- Save it for later
	end
end

mouse.KeyDown:connect(function(key)
	keysDown[key:upper()] = true -- Add the current key to a list of keys
	keyDown = true
end)
 
mouse.KeyUp:connect(function(key)
	keysDown[key:upper()] = false -- Tell the script that the key is no longer being pressed
	local hasKeyDown = false
	for key, isDown in pairs(keysDown) do -- Go through the list of keys that have been pressed
		if (isDown) then
			hasKeyDown = true -- Only set hasKeyDown to true if the key being checked is down
		end
	end
	keyDown = hasKeyDown -- If no keys were being pressed, this will be false. If a key was being pressed, this will be true
end)
 
removeControl() -- Disable their control over their character
game.Players.LocalPlayer.Character.Humanoid:MoveTo(Vector3.new(-9.5, 2.5, -169)) -- Make the character walk somewhere
end)

However I do not know why it still allows the player to walk! you can see I've even taken out the part of the script where it adds the players controls back to make sure that's not the case..

Help please!

(And Merry Christmas!!!)