Why does this script not work?

function touched(par)
if game.Name == "Basic Obby 1" then
	wait(1)
print(game.Name)
print("Teleporting")
id = game:GetService("AssetService"):CreatePlaceAsync("Obby", "Place For Player!") 
local tele = game:GetService("TeleportService")
tele:Teleport(id, getPlayer(par))
	
end
end


function getPlayer(Part)
	local Humanoid = Part.Parent:FindFirstChild('Humanoid')
	if (Humanoid ~= nil) then
		local Character = Humanoid.Parent
		if (Character ~= nil) then
			return game:GetService('Players'):GetPlayerFromCharacter(Character)		
		end
	end
end
		
script.Parent.Touched:connect(touched)

Why make a getPlayer function when you already have a GetPlayerFromCharacter function?

function touched(par)
	local player = game.Players:GetPlayerFromCharacter(par.Parent)
	
	if game.Name == "Basic Obby 1" and player then
    		wait(1)
		print(game.Name)
		print("Teleporting")
		local id = game:GetService("AssetService"):CreatePlaceAsync("Obby: " .. player.Name, game.PlaceId, " Place For Player!") 
		local tele = game:GetService("TeleportService")
		tele:Teleport(id, player)
	end
end

script.Parent.Touched:connect(touched)