Help me please?! this script won't work outside of studio.

I've put it inside of workspace as local, and regular script. Didn't run

I can't put it insideo f starterpack because its a freaking gamescript

I put it in serverscript service and it only works in studio just like workspace

doesn't do anything for gods sakes I need help..

wait(1)

for i,v in pairs(game.Players:GetChildren()) do
	if v:findFirstChild("PlayerGui") then
		v.PlayerGui.ScreenGui.Background:TweenSizeAndPosition(UDim2.new(0, 2200, 0, 2200), UDim2.new( 0, 0, 0, 0), "Out", "Quad", 1)
		wait(1)
		v.PlayerGui.ScreenGui.ScrollingFrame.Visible = true
	end
end

wait(5)

for i,v in pairs(game.Players:GetPlayers()) do
	if v:findFirstChild("PlayerGui") then
		v.PlayerGui.ScreenGui.Background:TweenSizeAndPosition(UDim2.new(0, 0, 0, 0), UDim2.new( 0, 0, 0, 0), "In", "Quad", 3)
		wait(3)
		v.PlayerGui.ScreenGui.ScrollingFrame.Visible = false
	end
end

Look in the last question you posted for an explanation on the code here. This is the second code block from the top, and this is to be used with a server script (normal script).

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(player)--Runs whenever a player is added to the game
player.CharacterAdded:connect(function()--Runs whenever a character is added to the game. If you want to have the gui load only once when the character spawns, then leave out CharacterAdded and remove an end)

local ScreenGui = Instance.new("ScreenGui") --Parenting it is not necessary

local Background = Instance.new("Frame")
Background.ZIndex = 1
Background.Size = UDim2.new( 0, 0, 0, 0)
Background.Position = UDim2.new( 0, 0, 0, 0)
Background.Transparency = 0.5
Background.BackgroundColor3 = Color3.new(72/255,72/255,72/255)

local StarterMenu = Instance.new("ScrollingFrame")
StarterMenu.ZIndex = 3
StarterMenu.Size = UDim2.new( 0, 250, 0, 150)
StarterMenu.Position = UDim2.new( 0.5, 0, 0.5, 0)
StarterMenu.Transparency = 0.5
StarterMenu.Visible = false
StarterMenu.BackgroundColor3 = Color3.new(85/255,0/255,0/255)

local ImageText = Instance.new("ImageLabel")
ImageText.ZIndex = 3
ImageText.Image = "rbxassetid://51806623"
ImageText.Size = UDim2.new( 0, 100, 0, 100)
ImageText.Transparency = 1
ImageText.BackgroundColor3 = Color3.new(255/255,255/255,255/255)

ScreenGui.Parent = player.PlayerGui
Background.Parent = ScreenGui
Background:TweenSizeAndPosition(UDim2.new(0, 1000, 0, 1000), UDim2.new( 0, 0, 0, 0), "Out", "Quad", 1)
wait(2)
StarterMenu.Parent = ScreenGui
StarterMenu.Visible = true
ImageText.Parent = ScreenGui
end)--closes CharacterAdded() event
end)--closes PlayerAdded() event