Player Gamepass Help?

I know there is a ton wrong with this script, can someone explain how to fix the issues. THANKS

function onPlayerEntered(newPlayer)
	local IDone=222805421
	local IDtwo=222807114
	if game:GetService("GamePassService"):PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,IDone)then 
	print (newPlayer.."has testing permission")
	if game:GetService("GamePassService"):PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,IDtwo)then
	print (newPlayer.."has V.I.P.")
	if not game:GetService("GamePassService"):PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,IDtwo) and 
	not game:GetService("GamePassService"):PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,IDone) then
	print (newPlayer.."is a visitor")
	end
	end
	end
end

game.Players.ChildAdded:connect(onPlayerEntered)

EDIT FOR DIITTO

local PassRank={}; --I removed the setHealth function for what im trying to do, but I saved it to my models.

function assertPlayer(Player)
    if(PassSettings[Player.Name].VIP)then
    newPlayer.PlayerGui.VIPBlock:Remove() --Doesn't do this
    end;

    if(PassSettings[Player.Name].Tester)then
    newPlayer.PlayerGui.BetaBlock:Remove() --or this
	newPlayer.PlayerGui.VIPBlock:Remove() --"         "
    end;

function onPlayerEntered(newPlayer)
    local GamePass=game:service'GamePassService';
    local ID1=222805421
    local ID2=222807114
    local function printf(String,...)
        print(string.format(String,...));
    end;
    local Passes={
        Tester=GamePass:PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,ID1) and true;
        VIP=GamePass:PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,ID2) and true;
    };

    if(next(Passes))then--// If player has any pass.
        for Pass in next,Passes do
            printf('Player %s has the %q pass.',
                newPlayer.Name,
                Pass
            );
        end;
    else
    printf('Player %s is a visitor.',newPlayer.Name);
	newPlayer.PlayerGui.VIPBlock:Remove() --this was my attempt at functioning with a player that has no pass
	wait(30)
	newPlayer:Kick()
    end
    PassRank[newPlayer.Name]=Passes;
    assertPlayer(newPlayer);
end;

game:service'Players'.PlayerAdded:connect(onPlayerEntered)

Just by looking at the structure of the script, I knew that there must be a logic error in here, assuming that you intend to have this script as a way to indicate what pass they bought.

Notice how these "if" statements are nested.

If a player has IDtwo, but doesn't have IDone, then line 7 will not execute, because the first tier of "if" statement is not true!

Therefore, your script will skip the whole chunk of code.

function onPlayerEntered(newPlayer)
	local IDone=222805421
	local IDtwo=222807114
	if game:GetService("GamePassService"):PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,IDone)then
		print (newPlayer.."has testing permission")
		if game:GetService("GamePassService"):PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,IDtwo)then
			print (newPlayer.."has V.I.P.")
			if not game:GetService("GamePassService"):PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,IDtwo) and not game:GetService("GamePassService"):PlayerHasPass(newPlayer,IDone) then
				print (newPlayer.."is a visitor")
			end
		end
	end
end

game.Players.ChildAdded:connect(onPlayerEntered)

Rather than nest them together, try and put them together with "elseif" statements, or just separate the "if" statements altogether. Let's compare the two methods:

#Figure A:

elseif Method

if [condition] then

elseif [condition] then

else [condition] then

end

#Figure B:

Separation Method

if [condition] then

end

if [condition] then

end

Figure A: This is good for levels of permission. The script will go through the series of elseif statements until it is true. If not, the if statement altogether will be skipped.

Figure B: This is good to just let them have whatever they bought (no levels of permission).

There are two objects: 1 and 2.

Person 1 bought object 1

Person 2 bought object 2

Person 3 bought object 1 & 2

#NOTE: THIS WILL ONLY FIX YOUR STRUCTURE PROBLEM.