Why do these not work?

These are just some scripts im practicing with to get used to Local Scripts Both Connect to each other.

here is script 1.

local p = game.Players.LocalPlayer
while wait() do
	if p.Name == "Player1" then
		local x = game.ServerScriptService.LocalScript
		n = x:Clone()
		n.Parent = p
	end
end

Here is the second one

local p = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local t = p.StarterGear

local x = game.ServerStorage.Gun

m = x:Clone()
m.Parent = t

LocalScripts don't have access to the ServerScriptService or the ServerStorage service.

Use ReplicatedStorage instead. Things in here are replicated to clients -- meaning LocalScripts have access to the objects on the client's copy of the world.