Why can't i clone a script into a player?

So basically what i want to do is clone a script into the player. I need to know if a player's health is 0, and if it is then set a value in the player to false. I thought the best way to do that was to clone in a script to detect the player's health, but it isn't inserting. There are no errors

Here is my insert script:

game.Players.Playeradded:Connect(function(player)
     local script = game.ReplicatedStorage.Script:Clone()
	for i,v in pairs(game.Workspace:GetChildren())do
		if v.Name == player.Name then
			script.Parent = v
		end
	end
end)

And here is the script i am inserting

while true do
	if script.Parent.Humanoid.Health == 0 then
		for i,v in pairs(game.Players:GetChildren())do
			if script.Parent.Name == v.Name then
				v.Bool.Value = false
			end
		end
	end
	wait(3)
end

There might be a more effective way of doing this, i'm not sure. If there is, please tell me!!!

Thanks!