How Come A Section Of My Code Never Runs In My Local Script?

I'm making a Greeting Gui to go with my chat commands and things aren't going to well. It seems that ROBLOX Studio isn't running a section of my code, the part where the text is set and the check on the player's permission is done. An reason why?

Code

local Player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local PlayerGUI = Player.PlayerGui
local StartMenu = PlayerGUI:WaitForChild("StartMenu")
local Text = StartMenu:WaitForChild("Text")
local ModulePlayerNms 
local PromptStartMenu = game.ReplicatedStorage.PromptStartMenu

PromptStartMenu.OnClientEvent:Connect(function(Table)
	ModulePlayerNms = Table
end)
function CheckPlayerPerm(PlayerToCheck, ModuleToSearch)
	local IfPlayer
	for _, plr in pairs(ModuleToSearch) do
		if PlayerToCheck.Name == plr then
			IfPlayer = PlayerToCheck
		end
		if IfPlayer ~= nil then
			return true
		else
			return false
		end
	end
end
for Transparency =  1, 0, -.01 do
	Text.BackgroundTransparency = Transparency
	wait(.001)
end
local TextString = "Thank You For Using J-Commands! This Is Still In BETA Phase So Except Some Bugs..."
local IfAdminText = "Welcome, "..Player.Name.." You Have Permission To Use Commands!"
if Text.BackgroundTransparency == 0 then -----------NEVER SEEMS TO RUN?!
	for i = 1, #TextString do
		Text.Text = string.sub(TextString, 1, i)
		wait(.07)
	end
	wait(2)
	if CheckPlayerPerm(Player, ModulePlayerNms) then
		for i = 1, #IfAdminText do
			Text.Text = string.sub(IfAdminText, 1, i)
			wait(.07)
		end
	end
end 
----SKIPS TO HERE 
wait(2)
for Transparency = 0, 1, .01 do
	Text.BackgroundTransparency = Transparency
	Text.TextTransparency = Transparency
	wait(.001)
end
wait(3)
StartMenu:Destroy()
print("Done!")

Area that doesn't run

local TextString = "Thank You For Using J-Commands! This Is Still In BETA Phase So Except Some Bugs..."
local IfAdminText = "Welcome, "..Player.Name.." You Have Permission To Use Commands!"
if Text.BackgroundTransparency == 0 then -----------NEVER SEEMS TO RUN?!
	for i = 1, #TextString do
		Text.Text = string.sub(TextString, 1, i)
		wait(.07)
	end
	wait(2)
	if CheckPlayerPerm(Player, ModulePlayerNms) then
		for i = 1, #IfAdminText do
			Text.Text = string.sub(IfAdminText, 1, i)
			wait(.07)
		end
	end
end