[help wanted] how to fix this? (i've had multible attempts all have failed)

i have tried removing )'s adding )'s removing ends and adding ends and every single time it comes up with a new error and I don't know how to fix it and I need it to continue my game

Code:

--The Start
local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local character = player.Character.ChildAdded
local players = game:GetService("Players")

function onPlayerAdded(plr)
	print(plr.Name .. " joined the game!")
	player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "*Snorre* *Snoree*"
	wait(3)
	player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "AH! I didn't see you there why must you wake me?"
	wait(3)
	player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "YOU DIDN'T MEAN TOO!?"
	wait(3)
	player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "YOU JUST CAME IN HERE AND AWOKE ME FROM MY SLUMBER!!"
	wait(5)
	player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Anyways now that you *spit* are here why dont you give me freedom from this place."
	wait(6)
	player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Who am I? I am the 1??????????3???????????????????E?????????????????????????? ?????????????????7??????????????{??????????????????D??????????????`?????????????????????\????????????????????????????????."
	wait(3)
	player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "How you ask? I DON'T KNOW, FIND SOMETHING!"
	--Getting Dynamite
	workspace.Barrier:Destroy()
	print("Get Dynamite")
	character:Connect(function(Dynamite)
		player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Dynamite, PERFECT! Now go explode those rocks"
		wait(3)
		player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Behind them is the Great Museum."
		
		workspace.ChildRemoved:Connect(function(Detect)
			if Detect.Name == "DetectionZone" then
				player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "YES!, YES! FINALLY!"
				wait(3)
				player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Okay now go outside from the door infront of you."
				
			workspace.ChildRemoved:Connect(function(DetectII)
				if DetectII.Name == "DetectionZone2" then
				player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "YES!, YES! FINALLY!"
				wait(3)
				player.PlayerGui.Text.Frame.TextLabel.Text = "Okay now go outside from the door infront of you."
			end
		end)
	end)
end
				
			
players.PlayerAdded:Connect(onPlayerAdded)

for _, player in pairs(players:GetPlayers()) do
	onPlayerAdded(player)
end